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Old 05-29-2012, 04:23 PM   #175
rparty89
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Default Re: FFR Community Pack Summer 2012 (Submissions Open)

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Originally Posted by Gundam-Dude View Post
Watch Out Pt. 2 (rparty89)
- In the beginning measures, the jump layering isn't consistent enough—be much more thorough with what you're layering to fit the feel and structure.
- Beat 174 and 176, you should really shift the patterns around to avoide the 16th jacks. It destroys the file flow.
- There are tons of interesting sounds going on which you can take advantage of and accent/emphasize using mini-holds. For a song like this, don't be afraid to go all out with hold usage.
- M64+ (Beat 252+) I found a bit anti-climactic. I expected heavier layering with jumps because this part is pretty much the largest build-up/rush in the song. What you have at the moment doesn't quite do justice—layer a bit more thoroughly and densely if needed, without creating jacks and awkward patterning.
- Overall, I don't have any problems with the layering in itself. Fix up the above and make an easier chart and you're good to go.
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WUT.
Well i got a easy chart but never finshed the top.
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