[lurker]

oh damn first try

- 30.840: put that 1/12 before the next 4th, it's slightly delayed

there's still a bass note at 30.84 which i'm not sure if i should step

-31.2s Strange hand usage here: in groups of three the second and third sounds are much heavier than the first, so it doesn't seem reasonable that the first one is a hand while the other two are jumps.
32.39s: Missing note to kick, should anchor with the following hand

hands are based on another synth layer, could be pr'd better

- 50.118: missing note for synth

i realized the hands here didn't really belong which freed up the space a bit (this pattern doesn't look right though)

- 87.469: ouuuuch, that's a gross pattern because of the 12th note mini-jack (comes out to a 202.5 BPM 16th mini-jack mid-stream)

- 107.082: those jumps... I understand that there's two instruments fighting there, but I'd personally drop those jumps given the section previous to that had jumps for the really strong synth melody

pattern is now 432321