04-11-2009, 10:33 AM
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Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: CNY
Age: 31
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Re: The Reasons
Well, it's certainly cute...
But, in all honesty, it lacks a sense of originality. You may have written this poem, but I have read countless iterations of it.
The best poems are those that succeed at providing the reader with a unique perspective, yet this poem has failed in that regard.
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