Thread: I wrote a poem
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Old 01-2-2008, 09:47 PM   #7
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Default Re: I wrote a poem

Forget what I said in my other two posts. This poem is pretty good. I re-read the poem thoroughly. I had to look a couple of the words up in Dictionary.com because my vocabulary is not that good. However, some parts I didn't understand quite well:

"We are more than metaphor waning in the wind,
More than faded maps
For minds shipwrecked by the airy space between our bodies"


It's so abstract.. could someone explain to me those two lines? o.0
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