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Originally Posted by Psychotik
Is there one or two specific points you'd like to point out? I really curious which points felt the most egregiously incorrect. I'll get around to checking all the notes and sending fixes on Wednesday.
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Absolutely.
Disregarding the intro, here's some detailed and reasonably glaring instances:
- 38.052/38.330: these two jumps can be flipped
- 46.849: this note here actually ascends to a note that's higher than the U at 46.571, so something like R-U would be better for continuity/accuracy
- 55.182: the note before this 12th is the same pitch (same as 55.738 and the note before it)
- 57.497/57.960: same column, but different notes (in fact, something that can be done starting from 57.219 with your rhythms being preserved is L-D|U-L|D-R| [12ths] because notes 1/4, and 2/5 are the same pair of notes, but 3/6 are accented and separated)
- 1:37.893: the guitar note that plays when this [LD] is hit is a different note from the previous one, so breaking these off will look better visually
- 1:53.608: same jump flip as 38.052/38.330
- 1:57.682: the note that falls on this [R] is different than the previous one (also, with some reworking, you can better capture the pitches on the following quarter notes starting at 1:58.330).
- 2:04.719: this note's different than the previous note you caught with the repeating [R]
There are others you might be able to improve, but these were some of the more glaring instances that I picked up at 100% speed.