06-21-2020, 08:29 PM
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Join Date: Sep 2012
Location: Michigan
Age: 29
Posts: 1,095
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Re: Official Tournament 13 Batch Notes
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Originally Posted by psychoangel691
We Want To Run (Gradiant) [8.5/10]
Artist: Frums -- Perms: OK
- 21.482: not sure about the inclusion of this jack given that it’s the only time you follow this particular sound before having it carried away by the other melody - might be better to simply remove these notes altogether
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Removed
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- 39.057 to 46.958: note placement can be -slightly- improved for PR purposes, but it’s not that bad as is
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Think issue here isn't really incorrect pr, but that the pr leads to that repeating 121 patterning which is a bit too left hand biased overall. Not liking the patterning when I change the mini left-hand sections though so I'm leaving them as is but slightly adjusting the patterning between them.
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- 1:13.131: missing jump for brass + percussion landing
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added
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- 2:29.427/2:37.328: I’d add the note here for the deep background kicks, but it’s most certainly not necessary given that the focus is the piano melody
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wasn't sure about it before sending in, but eh it's noticeable enough. added
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- 2:47.451 to 3:032.54: <3 (althouuuuuuuugh, if we want to be picky, change at 2:50.414 is -technically- not necessary.)
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Not solely focused on that runningman-ish sound in the foreground when patterning here. There's a descending pitch change in the background synth that changes overall chord sound here so I alternated the patterning slightly as well
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- 3:43.501/3:51.402: missing triples?
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yep, added.
Glad you liked it overall, thanks for the notes.
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