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Re: Batch Review Thread
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FMO/FGO EVENT BATCH NOTES
Rebirth
11ELEVEN: +?
- 4:22 long sharpnel file would be pretty boring. Steps are boring as they are anyway
4 Chord Touhou: +
- Gonna have cetaka relayer this and add the necessary jacks, but this is a good sim.
Almost There: ?
- The sim is good, and would probably be accepted if you didn't pull the stupid massive 32nd stream for 8 measures. That sound is barely audible
Angelic Mirage: +?
- Parts in measures 18 - 25 couldv'e been done better. Otherwise not too bad
Are You Happy?: +?
- You've got to be kidding me, the song is incredibly incredibly repetitive and the whole thing was stepped rofl
- Make a cut and we'd be more likely to consider it
Battle Theme #37: +?
- Not bad of a sim, but I see some places where you couldv'e layered better and added hands
- Not to mention it seems to go a little offbeat as the song progresses
Big Blue: +?
- All minijacks for the triplets? Anything else wouldv'e been better. Even if that wouldv'e been the correct thing to put, for a metal song like this, and considering the notes you put those minijacks to, ou probably shouldv'e put non jack patterns down. As they are it makes the sim seem dumb while everything else about it is pretty good
Blood and Black Chocolate: +?
Blue Zenith: -
- hey thats cool, multiple charts and freezes in both
Blue-Violet: +?
- We have a version thats already queue'd. Its not an FMO/FGO but the steps fit the song better than these steps do
Boo: ?
- Long songs are not reccommended at all when they're songs like these. Quit out after like 50 seconds
Club: +
- Accepted because its my own sim and it seems about right
Core: +?
- Funner patterns couldv'e been used. It feels pretty repetitive because of the lack of many different patterns in the active 16th parts
DATA DRAIN: ?
- So repetitive. Even more so than Blurk's old version for it
Death on a Dynasty: +?
- whoa major sync error 110 seconds in
- Actually a good sim, just needs a little better layerin
Digital Confession: +?
- 5 minute sims are so dumb when they're for repetitive songs. Its a good sim and I think its just about worth accepting except for those pointless minijacks and the length. Cut the song length down and resubmit for a normal batch because it'd make a good file
disconnect the dots: ?
- Not what I'd be looking for in a sim for this event
Disconnected Exodus: +
- Great file even if it is a little repetitive
Disregard (Both versions): -
- Sorry, but I just can't see any kind of good file coming from these Berserker songs. Both sims are kinda dumb
Eclipse (Solar): +
- Note for Tass: play the oni
- 32nd streams are so stupidly hard but ok its a good sim
Electro Rush X8 v2: +
Eradication: +
Fareast Hardstylerz: +?
Feelings From The Air: ?
- Sync errors, notes placed in incorrect spots.
Happy Rainbow: ?
- That song doesn't really need to be stepped like I did the oni for it 2 - 3 years ago. Besides, we have one in the queue already thats better
Hardkore Atomic: +?
- Song kinda sucks but the simfile for it is pretty good.
- During some of the 12th double jack streams the notes aren't the same, they change every 3 notes/every beat. So the pattern should change.
- Some of the 32nd streams should have one less arrow. The blue arrow on some of those 32nd bursts should be cut out
Higan Retour: ?
- HST's sim was pretty much the best you can get for this song. It just doesn't seem to compare, even if his wasn't for FFR.
- This one just feels weird to play. 32nds in places that don't really need them. These 48th things in the slow parts probably don't go there at all
Integraation: +
Kimi Wa Nan Terabyte: +?
- Yeah this sim kinda isn't an FMO/FGO. That and theres ultimate green note syndrome at the end, but thats an SM bug, thats not you. I just don't know how to fix it
LET'S NYANCING: +
- This is like... the perfect hard file for a Sharpnel song. Except its killingscum but whatever, same guys. Hands might be a little too much but its awesome
Little God Ch@nnel (Classic Rocker): +
- I would definitely not expect a good sim out of this song. Very nice
- Few small things I'm noticing around the simfile, I might talk to you on AIM and have you fix them up or something
Lucky Star OP (TK_pavonineukon): +?
- Classic Rocker's destroys this
Maikelru's OP: + / +?
- I think that double jumpstream in the very beginning is unnecessary, but I'm not sure. Tass can look at this one and decide
MODEL DDX: +?
Molto v2: +?
- Reach's v1 is better
Nanairopanda v2: +
- My sim, etc
Nauticus' Tragic Past Revealed: ?
- Not the correct rhythms
NECROPOTENCE: +?
- In terms of fun factor, this sim isn't too great
Novo Mundo: +
OniGiri: ?
- Retarded jacks where they don't need to be. Super long streams where they definitely aren't necessary. Incredibly annoying simfile
Operation Evolution: +?
- Why do you all step such long songs like this -_-. If you're going to step something over 3:30 in length, it better be damn good
- Not FMO/FGO material anyway
Piano Etude "Gymnastics": +
- I need to look at the sync, but its accepted
Radio Heads: +?
- Few spots that need more/less layering. I'll help you with those
- Some inconsistency near the end
Rapture: ?
- Its not a bad simfile, its just stupid for the song
Reality: + / +?
- This isn't nearly as bad as the Disregard submissions but I still think any Berserker sim is stupid. I'll leave this up to tass again because I'm somewhat biased on Berserker sims
Rottel-da-STAR: ?
- Big sync error in the beginning. Random 32nds that aren't really needed at all
Saikyou OX Keikaku v2: +
- In my own opinion it might not be an FMO but I'll let tass/jx decide
Secret Zombie Room v2: -
- no
Setsujou! Hyakka Ryouran: +
STRAWBERRY SWEETZ: +?
Tell v2: +
- F12 once to the gap
The Adventures of Lolo: +
The Games We Never Player: ?
- The artist is Zaghurim, not aspergian
- Rhythms in some parts are just wrong
THE OTHERS: +?
- Doesn't seem like FMo material
Variations 2: +?
- Seems like too much to be a good sim. Your original version is probably better
Vertex+i: +
- I'll have to fix some sync errors but it looks like a good sim
W@REZ: +?
- May not be FMo material
White: +?
- Some of the jump gallop parts were just put there so the sim would be more difficult. Its not really the actual layering.
- Needs some better layering in those same 8th jump parts
Your Destination: ?
- The jacks go to nothing. Long ass song, etc
JX
[[White]] [[eastsideman09]] FMO event [+? - 5]
misrhythms.. at m3-m6 most of 48ths are actually 32nds + 64th triplets.
64th is 32nd/24ths are 64ths on m7-13 (this applies to all similar parts), 24th on m53?
overhanded at the ending.
4 chord touhou (cetaka) [+ / 7.5] (low-12)
11ELEVEN (omgitznpv & eastsideman09) [+? / 4.5]
inconsistent rhythms on m36-43, at m52 missing notes on 4ths, end of m92 should be 32nds, most 24ths/48ths on burst zone are actually 32nds/64ths,
also want lower-left PR there, quad placement overall
Almost There (ElectricWerewolf) [+. / 6.5] (high-12)
32nd stream (includes many trills, RM) is so intense compared to other parts, felt making it harder by overlayering but rhythms are correct overall
Angelic Mirage (unkdavar) [+? / 5]
some parts are fun but layering is pretty inconsistent overall.
longtrill at m51- is unfun. 16th stream on m35-41?
Besides 48th bursts the difficulty doesn't deserve FMO
Are You Happy (smartdude1212) [? / 4]
196BPM 16ths = 130.66BPM 24ths (not 147) = 98BPM 32nds = 65.33BPM 48ths (not 73.5)... ok?
Difficulty inconsistency, need to follow more instruments for hard files, m216 should be 32nds
Battle Theme #37 (SulferDragon) [+. / 6.5] (high-11)
inconsistent 16th placement on m15, 19, 40, 60, 64, 85
big blue (JX) [own file] (high-11)
Blood and Black Chocolate (robertsona) [+? / 5.5]
a bit too easy for this batch, misrhythms on m7, also missing notes in many parts, fun but could be better/harder
Blue Zenith (Knoobish) [- / 0]
freezes/multi difficulty
Blue-Violet (Silvuh) [+? / 5.5]
misrhythm at the end of m16/m48 (they are 24ths), m26/m30 (one extra 32nd), m33 (missing one 32nd note), abuse/overuse of quads
Boo (customstuff) [- / 0]
offsync as hell, YNS/wrong coloring at parts, missing a lot of rhythms
Club (Rebirth) [+ / 6.5] (high 11)
technically correct except for some PR, kinda harder version of AIM Anthem
Core (customstuff) [? / 4]
difficulty is apparently under FMO, misrhythm on m18/98/114, many missing/extra notes with rhythm parts
DATA DRAIN (Ravia) [? / 3]
PR could be better, pattern changes at ending (especially roll parts) are weird
Death of a Dynasty (Vote4Nixon) [? / 4.5]
inconsistent layering after m31, misrhythm on m45/127, after m47 16ths should go with drums they don't sync with guitars well. a few off parts around m70,
rhythms after m77? offsync in m85-106.
Digital Confession (_.Spitfire._) [+? / 5.5]
rhythms on m75/115/155/187/211, technically ok for other parts, but whole thing is way too repetitive/long
Disconnect the Dots (HighBuddha) [? / 4]
need more consistency for streams (I don't recommend putting streams on hihats on this song tho)/PR, color notes after m153 are weird
Disconnected EXODUS (eastsideman09) [? / 3.5]
file is ok until m34 but after that it's like a storm of misrhythm (I'm not even pointing out those).
Disregard ([TeRa]) [? / 3.5]
more like above FGO but felt stream pattern is quite awkward, and honestly I don't think those sequent 300BPM 16ths fit the music too well.
Disregard (ExtremeX) [? / 3.5]
set 300BPM, placement of jacks/jumps/hands is weird
Eclipse (Solar) (ElectricWerewolf) [+ / 7.5] (high-12)
multi difficulties but played oni cause it looks obvious. some 32nd stream patterns are awkward, otherwise rly cool file
Electro Rush X8 v2 (Rebirth0) [+ / 7] (mid-12)
Eradication (ElectricWerewolf & bluguerrilla) [+ / 7.5] (low-12)
still extra 24th on m34/38 but ok
FAREAST HARDSTYLERZ [Oni] (cyrx900) [? / 3]
misrhyrhm on m8/86/137-142, color notes on m23?, color notes aren't synced too well but ok, 64th rolls are pretty crappy
Feelings From The Air (Knoobish) [? / 4]
misrhythm at m5-6, m8, m40.. many parts, offset of beginning is early, also some jack placements don't make sense
Happy Rainbow (Cyanite) [+? / 4.5]
bpm/gap wrong, 24ths? and extra 32nds on m75, ending is just offsync/weird. JS attempt isn't bad but not better than current queue'd one overall
Hardkore Atomic (EnR) [+? / 5]
many misrhythms, there're no 32nds on this song, those are 48ths. 64ths are weird on m68. otherwise it's ok.
Higan Retour (Ravia) [? / 3]
most 32nds/48ths go with nothing, or are misrhythmed. Original might be HST's but layering is changed with an inconsistent way
Integraation (bluguerrilla then SulferDragon) [+? / 5.5]
beginning of m11 should be 32nds (actual rhythm is 64th), 24ths on m15/33/70/71 are 32nds, misrhythm on m21/50, lags on 106-107?
Kimi Wa Nan Terabyte (omgitznpv) [+. / 6] (mid-11 due to the guitar)
some overdone parts/misrhythms on guitar part (plus contains 24th jacks and such that are just retarded), others are fine
LET'S NYANCING (omgitznpv) [+? / 5]
32nd spins could be rolls, hand/double placement on m53-88 is apparently wrong
felt missing some 16th rhythms but ok, other things are fine
Little God Ch@nnel (ClAsSiC_RoCkEr) [+? / 6]
The way of stepping is technically good, but jack usage like this is bad when the song is pretty repetitive (190bpm longjacks aren't recommended in general).
Lucky Star OP (Little God Remix) (TK_pavonineukon) [? / 3.5]
misrhythms on m32/49/65/81.. etc, a lot. inconsistent layering.
Maikelru's OP (Maikelru) [+. / 6] (mid-12)
file is full of annoying/retarded patterns and song is lol, but most parts are technically correct surprisingly.
rhythms are well-done, PR is good but could be better at parts.
Model DDX (Sulferdragon and bmah) [+? / 5.5]
m38-39 - guitar is faster than steps, m41-42/m55/ steps are faster than the guitar, also misrhythm in m38/m57, use 192nds for syncing, a bit easy for this batch
Molto Vivace v2 (NetJet) [- / 0]
way too many misrhythms and sync/layering error
Nanairopanda (Rebirth) [+ / 7.5] (mid-11)
several things are correctly done/harder compared to V1, only some jack use is a bit annoying
Nauticus' Tragic Past Revealed (Ravia) [? / 1]
extra note on m4, misrhythm on m6/ending, m35-38 are 32nds(kinda fast though), 64ths on m18?, 48th at m63/67?, patterns aren't PR at all.
NECROPOTENCE (bmah) [+ / 6.5] (low-12)
missing a 32nd on some patterns, others are fine
Novo Mundo (Dj_Ossa) [+ / 7] (low-11)
OniGiri (ExtremeX) [- / 0.5]
a lot of misrhythms, also patterns are totally horrible
Operation Evolution (Coolboyrulez0) [? / 4]
layering/rhythms could be a lot better, 24ths on m161, also patterns should be PR
Piano Etude Gymnastics (behanjc) [++ / 8] (high-11)
a bit off around m9/19/29-31 but acceptable level enough for FFR. also 16th doubles are a bit overdone, but great file overall
Radio Heads (behanjc) [+ / 7.5] (low-11)
Rapture (Coolboyrulez0) [? / 3]
quite inconsistent layering/PR, misrhythms on m36-38 (those are 32nds)
Reality (hi19hi19) [+ / 7] (mid-12)
rhythms are nice for this song
Rottel-da-STAR (_.Spitfire._) [- / 0]
auto rejection for permission issue
Saikyou OX Keikaku V2 (Rebirth) [+? / 5.5]
jack usage of m29, underlayer on m34-37(and all similar parts), misrhyrhms on m75/78/83
Secret Zombie Room V2 (sticklydude) [- / 0.5]
Those 32nds don't make sense at all plus awkward patterns.
Setsujou! Hyakka Ryouran! (Rebirth) [++ / 8] (mid-11)
simply pretty fun.
STRAWBERRY SWEETZ (Silvuh) [+ / 7] (high-11)
32nd trills on m68/m217 are a bit stupid, others are fine
Tell v2 [dore] [> - 6.5]
multi difficulty (played oni), jack version.
pitch relevancy has some room for improvement, missing notes on m71-72, are jacks with BDs needed?
I don't think queue'd one should be replaced with this one personally
the adventures of lolo (JX) [own file] (low-12)
The Games We Never Played (Ravia) [? / 1]
want more PR and correct rhythms (misrhythms and random color notes)
THE OTHERS (TK_pavonineukon) [? / 2.5]
want more correct rhythms on m4/8/.. all similar parts, too easy for this batch, rhythms/double placement aren't fun, ending
Variations2 (jx) [own file] (low-11)
Vertex+i [[[eastsideman09]]] [+? / 4.5]
extra note on m14/16, m67 is 16ths, incorrect layering (some doubles/hands aren't needed), offsync especially at second half
W@REZ(EnR) [+. / 6] (low-11)
a bit gap late, missing note on m8, otherwise not bad
Your Destination - Starfalcon176 [+? / 4.5]
m33/73/105 are 32nds, some jacks are abused(m20/22/24/125/etc), some notes go with nothing/inconsistent layering
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