[psychoangel691]

These are the notes I do have from James

Dance With 12 Gauge (AutotelicBrown) [8/10]

This reminds me of Corpse Party a lot, definitely a good sign

57.515 - Jump here
1:15.015 - Since you’re following the jumps to the piano, this should be a jump as well
1:28.390 - Jump here to follow up the 4th jump prior to it, Preferably have it be [14][34]
1:29.765 - Jump here
1:29.827 to 1:29.952 - This part is actually a 24th. Have it be: 3124 (this is starting from the 4th on 1:29.765)
1:30.890 - Missing 16th here since you’re following the piano melody
1:31.765 - Jump
1:31.765 to 1:31.890 - Same comment as I mention in the 1:29.827 marker
1:33.515 to 1:33.765 - While it is correct, the sound is too faint to really warrant that trill. Just a nitpick from me, don’t have to remove it, but just a suggestion.
1:33.515 - Jump here
1:33.765 - Jump here
1:35.515 to 1:35.765 - Same as the comment I made in 1:33.515 about the trill
1:35.515 - Jump
1:35.765 - Jump

G e n g a o z o (DarkZtar) [/]

Judge Notes: offset should be 1.592, gonna be using times from this fixed offset

25.121 to 26.690 - Where do those 32nds go?
*28.160 to 28.356 (and similar instances leading up to 39.239) - Sound doesn’t sound like it’s going to the triple jacks. And another note to make here, not sure if it’s the result of me fixing the offset or not but, most of the jacks in this section aren’t justified to be placed in this section and sounded like they were meant to be put just prior to where you placed the jacks. For example: Using the 28.160 instance, The jack itself sounded like it starts on the 8th jump on 28.062 and ends on the 4th jump on 28.258, and so forth. The jack placements sounded like you started them a 16th later than anticipated. This section needs to be combed down and rearranged accordingly.
40.611, 42.180, etc - Where does this 4 note jack go to?
51.788 - That quad isn’t very cash money of you. But seriously, the quad itself feels out of place in terms of transition.

Labradorite(bmah)[/]

Judge Notes: offset is -0.643

Robot Truck Driver (devonin) [/]
devonin’s Comments:
Pre-existing permission for Torley Wong, including the 'TORLEY' version with a song already in the game under that particular name.

The 16th notes on the grace note runs at 55.65, and then repeatedly in the 1:26.35-1:45.60 sound correct to me, but they may be off, as in some places it feels like there are three notes (the 16th note sections) and in some it sounds like there are two notes (as the 24ths starting at 1:16) so I expect there will be some correction requested by judges with a better ear for precision.

Judge Notes: Dev. Why you do this to me. The offset is wrong aaaaaa. Offset is -0.030

10.230 - You started deviating the jump layering you had for this sound and that jump sound is still prevalent up until



The Glorious (Final Sketch Mix) (EzExZeRo7497)[9/10]

Judge Notes: I actually have nothing to point out that would cause me to pass up on this. Wow. I would say to double check on the 16ths on 49.378, 49.494, 49.724 & 49.840 as I don’t quite catch those 16ths being emphasized. Just double check that and you should be good to go! Fantastic file~

Uso and Braindead Berzerker (DourGent) [8.5/10]

Judge Notes: Dour, what the fuck are these patterns lmfao. It made my sides fucking orbit lmao. I love it. This is gonna piss off a lot of people but this file is hilarious and I love it. Just some minor mistakes, but fuck lmao. I love this.

13.933 - Jump here
23.893 - missing 12th note here to accentuate the coin sound
28.756 - Jump here
28.932 - Missing 32nd here
1:22.108 - double check this 32nd, don’t hear the emphasis on this warranting the jack
+1:26.637 to 1:29.226 - LMAO
1:29.226 to 1:29.461 - Would love if this bit got emphasized juuuuust a tiny bit.


Passed files will be looked at by TC_Halogen in the next few days.