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Default Re: Batch Review Thread

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7/31/08


Note: A lot of these files still have very minor tweaks that have been suggested by jx and blu.  Please feel free to make these minor tweaks and re-email me just the dwi file and I'll replace the current version.
The Queue
Planet Karma - stargroup - would kinda like to see the 16th jack section toned down
Air.sul G iRock - behanjc
CRASH the BEAT - behanjc - definitely some weird patterns throughout
Falsie the Pseudo-Science Girl - behanjc
Funktacular - dore
Here we go - jimerax
Integraation - blu & Sulfer - i know you are fixing this as per jx's comments.  also, the 48th rolls at the start seem kinda out of place with the rest of the file
Ome Minute Waltz v2 - jx
OSTER Project World Tour 04 - behanjc
Procrastination on a Paper - silvuh
Randomness Reactor III - Kommisar - this song is pretty crappy though
Speedcore Sunday - jx
Starlight - macgravel
Fei Longer - hi19


Tested by Tass, Not Queue'd
A World of Piano - nice sync.  what both judges said.  also, last 30 or so seconds seem intentionally overstepped vs the music
Blue-Violet - fix the layering
Document 13b - what jx said
Einstein Rosen Bridge - what both said
Kanon-Kanon - definitely overdoubled
lightfoot - autorejected for hands in non-FMO
Lunatic Princess - hands in stream, overlayered, we don't really need another LP file that isn't THAT different from the one already in-game.
Space! Wave! Akiba-Pop - fix up jumps, overwise good.  32nds are fine for the rolls.
Big Blue v2 - fix PR.  It is pretty boring in the 1st half vs v1.  
The Crow's Eyes - this never ended...  please cut.  look into the other comments as well.



JX's Notes

[Wild ARMs Town] (Redorigami) [? / 4]
song/steps are pretty repetitive for 4 minute.
need shorter song, more consistent steps.

{Lazy Summer Days} (Xandertrax) [? / 5]
m1-12 are overall offsync, all of mini 24ths should be 32nds
The song should fade out earlier.

{The Sewers} (Arrowhead Stadium) [- / 0]
no file

{Wildflower} (blazelust) [- / 0]
offsync + misrythms(all 12ths). couldn't even understand what arrows are going, quit out.

~Progress~ (three17s) [? / 3.5]
difficulty is ok, but pattern and jump placement are completely random. 

==Planet KARMA== (stargroup) [+ / 8.5] (11)
m50-51 should go with the harp. jacks in m102-109 don't match the music too well.
minor sync issue in m172-174, m186-188.
It still has high technical level, but it's basically a clone of SM dump.

13th,Friday (megamon88) [? / 4.5]
offsync at parts due to incorrect bpm changes, inconsistent layering at parts(understepped at parts).
It would be better if patterns are more PR (some parts are ok). 

260 (smartdude1212) [? / 4.5]
kinda boring due to the lack of layering, also some rhythms don't flow well for me.

3020 (Coolboyrulez0) [? / 3.5]
misrhythm on m8, 16, etc (20ths), PR could be better. jumps could be used on proper place.
songcut is better.

A Nightmare Before Kefka - Copy [- / 0]
freeze.
PR, misrhythm, etc

A World of Piano [sc979] [+. / 7] (9)
Not perfect but syncing is good enough for FFR.
some issues with PR(unnecessary jacks could be changed)/jump placement/split placement.

Air.sul G iRock (behanjc) [+ / 7] (10)

Balloon Fever v2 (Crayzie) [- / 4.5]
basically similar to V1, just a bit understepped.

Battleman Zero Theme (-Barista-)

Blue-Violet (Silvuh) [+. / 6.5] (8)
Layering between piano and drums is a bit inconsistent at parts.
The rest is ok.

Chariot (JenovaSephiroth) [+? / 6]
Color changing technique is interesting.
but in parts like m55-62, felt missing some rhythms (understepped at parts).
4 min full song is a bit too long for this song.

chemicalattraction (NestleKwik) [? / 3]
gay early by like 100ms, many misthyrhms there.
felt arrows are going with the vocal and drums randomly.

Chocolate Magic-(behanjc) [+? / 6]
gap early, felt steps are going with not very audible parts a bit too much.

Chrono Eternit (xxJakexx) [- / 0]
offsync, YNS

Cloud Control (batistabomb300) [? / 4]
gap late, misthyrhms in m45, m56, m72, etc. stream patterns are neither PR nor index.
inconsistent jump placement at parts.

Concrete Dandelions (TC_Halogen) [? / 5]
many misrhythms overall. the second half is pretty repetitive.

Corneria (Trance Remix) (Coolboyrulez0) [? / 4.5]
a lot of misrhythms, felt patterns are random.

CRASH the BEAT! (behanjc) [+. / 6.5] (10)
in m55-66 felt some jumps in 24ths are overdone
m81/m85 are slightly misrhythmed(but ok), and weird patterns

Crying Soul v2 (Breakdown16) [? / 5]
m27 should go with drums, 16ths in m42? PR could be better.

Damage Control (Mahjix) [? / 3.5]
gap late, PR could be better, rhythms after m63?

Dance Off (dtpietrzak) [? / 2]
steps don't flow the music well overall.

DeVouR (Xandertrax) [? / 5]
some parts are PR and properly layered but burst patterns (m22, m32-, and more) are extremely awkward.
48ths should be 32nds.

Digital Confession (SulferDragon) [+? / 5.5]
Not too much issues except for some PR things, but felt long and repetitive overall.

Digital Skies (kpmuzik) [+? / 6]
It has good PR and some parts are creative, but layering is inconsistent at parts.
m5-12 - increasing jumps with PR 16ths is a better way.
m37-40, 57-60 - should be jumpstreams
m86-89, m98-105 - keep piano rhythms, double jacks in m89 are overdone
m110-113 - not sure what's going on there, weird patterns
etc. and songcut hopefully.

Document 13b (FFR Remix) (bluguerrilla) [+? / 5.5]
most parts are technically ok, felt some jacks are unnecessary and some bursts have bad patterns.
blank in m57?

Domhail - Bosa  (Netjet & EAGAMES) [- / 0.5]
offsync, wrong BPM

Drop (OperationStrawbarry) [? / 4]
patterns are not PR at all, 24ths are inconsistent (and some are misrhythmed).
m59- double placement could be better.

-trainstation dukeout- (b-a-e-r) [- / 0]
no file

Education(Beethovens_Mask) [? / 2.5]
some 16ths are 12ths, missing some notes. also PR could be a lot better.

Einstein Rosen Bridge Cut [dore] [+. / 6.5] (11)
kinda interesting, double jacks/32nd trills are pretty gay though. tiny misrhythms on bursts. 

Essential Speed (championanwar) [? / 4.5]
jump placement (especially m23-25), 16ths are put inconsistently. a bit boring overall.

F (Knoobish) [? / 2.5]
BPM wrong, many misrhythms overall, m7 is 12th, m8 is 24ths, etc. many jacks there aren't needed.
PR could be a lot better.

Faint (Remix) (_.Spitfire._) [? / 4.5]
misrhythms on many 32nds/48ths. felt most hands/some jumps, jacks are unnecessary. enjoyable than I thought tho.

Fall Foliage (SulferDragon) [+? / 6]
some jumps are missed, and some aren't needed (should be put where the sounds overlap consistently).
120BPM parts should be 80BPM 24ths, notes are weird. PR could be better. others are fine

Falsie the Pseudo-Science Girl(behanjc) [+? / 6]
m15-m22, m77-85 notes for the pitch changes of synth are wanted IMO. 24th in m49?
also, consistency in m25-34 could be better (jumps).

Fire Aura (kjwkjw) [? / 2]
offsync, so many misrhythms, lack of consistency. 64ths aren't needed. don't use Edit.

Footsteps (Crayzie) [? / 3]
overall, PR/consistency issue

Suikoden (Forgotten Daze?) (Theone_one?) [? / 3]
there're some misthythms, also rhythms are boring overall for a long song. gap early

Frozen_Bond(Beethovens_Mask) [- / 1]
There're some misrhythms (want detailed rhythms for piano), also PR/consistency issue, gap early

Funktacular [dore] [+. / 6] (6)
pattern error in m17/21, a bit inconsistent but acceptable level for an easy file

Geno's Forest F-Zero (MrPopadopalis25) [? / 5]
nothing special, but I want more layered harder file for V2.

Gig the Alternative (behanjc+stargroup) [? / 6.5]
unique file but misrhythms on m25, m83/106 is offsync, m110- just weird, etc.
and at least cut the song, otherwise I can't accept.

Gyermeteg (Dragoonhead) [? / 4.5]
Isn't this Hiszekeny? BPM off (MM isn't always correct), offsync ending. jacks are misplaced at parts.

Hardcore Bass (cyrx900) [+? / 6]
sync on m31, 32nds on m39/71 aren't needed
not bad overall, but silent(or step voices)/repetitive parts should be cut

here we go (jimerax) [own file]
nothing special.

Here We Go (stargroup100) [no rating]
some parts are identical with my previous ver rofl
didn't like the way of stepping of beginning-middle much, just personal opinion.

HereWeGo(psychozerosk8er) [no rating]
felt some parts are misrhythmed.

Highway Star (Knoobish) [? / 5]
jack placement isn't PR or music relevant overall IMO. also handstream isn't a good idea for FFR.

Hyper Highspeed Star (Izzy) [- / 0]
freeze

I am Maid v2 (npv) [+? / 5.5]
I don't get some of those hand usage (also overused for ffr), and m68. also ending is offsync. JS is ok.

I Want Candy(-barista) [- / 0.5]
wtf are those 32nds?

Integraation (bluguerrilla then SulferDragon) [+. / 6.5] (11)
rhythms in m14(should be 32nds), m21&m32(actual rhythm is 64th but 32nds are ok), m106. need to fix those

Its A Small World (Hairy Cabbage) [- / 1]
it has fatal misrhythm on the main rhythm, plus inconsistent overall

IVALTEK (three17s) [? / 3]
there're some misrhythms. also, some parts should have more rhythms other than 8ths.

Jingle Bells (Frigtionn) [- / 0]
freeze, also misrhythms and misplaced jacks

Kanon-Kanon (bmah) [+. / 6.5] (11)
some doubles on 8th part aren't needed (for the melody), missing 8ths on m110-111.

Lady's Cake (DarkbearX & HammyMcSquirrel) [+? / 5.5]
rhythms are ok, layering is inconsistent IMO.

Last Boss Battle Theme #2 (SulferDragon) [? / 5]
gap early, jack placement at beginning is inconsistent, double placement. also missing notes at parts

Lawn Wake IV v2 (t-rogdor) [- / 0.5]
weird sync, a lot of misrhythms, jacks, worse than V1

Leeroy Jenkins (fun times mix)  (Silver_Brian) [? / 2.5]
I didn't get how it was stepped (vocal follow maybe), felt pretty inconsistent, and has many misrhythms.

lightfoot (stargroup) [+. / 6.5] (8)

lolhappy (HammyMcSquirrel) [? / 5]
rhythms in m49-64 don't fit the music much, and felt repetitive.

Lolit Speed (xxJakexx) [? / 4.5]
yellow note on 4th, want more consistent jump placement. has a few misrhythms

Lunatic Princess (npv) [+. / 6.5] (10)
hands in the stream are overdone IMO but ok

Malicious Fingers (Cyanite) [? / 3.5]
notes aren't synced well overall, misrhythm in m128, m140-, etc

Marisa Stole The Precious Thing (Ravia)

MaXx AttaXx v2 (championanwar) [? / 4]
similar in difficulty for a v2. steps are nothing special

Mike French Hardcore Custom  (t-rogdor) [- / 0]
no thx

Mirror (nev670) [- / 0] 
offsync + YNS = immediate quit out

Music (Serialization) [- / 1.5]
a lot of misrhythms, inconsistency

Ninja Lad (megamon88) [+? / 6]
m23- putting minijacks is preferable for PR, also jump placement could be better on this part 
and 12th part. missing note on m48. others are fine

NthDegree (Cyanite) [? / 2.5]
you may have put effort on syncing this, but it's still bad.
would be better than planet karma if it's correctly done though.

One Minute Waltz v2 (JX) [own file]
omg

One Thousand Cranes v2 (Xiaounlimited) [? / 3]
pretty offsync, many errors in jump placement/32nd rhythms/PR

Operation_Evolution (flipsta_lombax) [? / 3.5]
PR could be better, bad jack placement, also many misrhythms. songcut is preperable

Osakanajigoku (trumaestro) [? / 5]
m2-m8 putting jacks on the guitars isn't a good idea.
adding some more 24ths/32nds for drums would be better, also some 24ths are misrhythmed.
unnecessary jump in m48.

OSTER Project Presents World Tour 2004 (behanjc) [+? / 6.5]
decent but felt technical level still doesn't match the length (I mean it should be polished more).
at the beginning snares should be done correctly by using 48ths, m14 is 24ths, m109/111 is 48ths.
some syncing on color notes could be better(like m115), some harp parts should be stepped IMO.
bursts in m135 are 24ths, in m136 are 32nds. m143- 24ths could be better on some parts. m189-190 is offsync, etc

PacMania (customstuff) [? / 3]
32nds should be 24ths (not very audible), 11 sec song, the concept isn't very fun for me

Pacsyndrome (bmah) [+? / 5.5]
use 32nd trills for m38/m42 consistently (and remove jumps on yellow notes).
IMO the song has more technical factors such as 16ths for drums, 24ths for synth, bursts for organs, etc.
PR is ok.

PAL,36 (trumaestro & flipsta_lombax) [? / 3.5]
the whole layering method is weird for me, especially quad placement.

Perfect Insanity  (Silver_Brian) [? / 3]
steps are inconsistent, need proper layering at sections.
PR in m114- could be better.

Procrastination on a Paper (dag12) [+? / 6]
decently technically accurate overall. 
after m37 PR gets a bit worse. m46/m50 should have JS. 
patterns after m65 aren't very good, ending could be 32nds (personal liking).
similar level to silvuh's, more erroneous but has better PR and more layering.

Procrastination on a Paper (Silvuh) [+? / 6]
decently technically accurate overall, patterns after m65.
PR could be better at parts.

Pure Hatred (t-rogdor) [- / 1]
lots of misrhythms, that's all

Rainspark  (Silver_Brian) [? / 3.5]
PR and consistency could be better. there're a few misrhythms

Randomness Reactor III (Kommisar[os]) [+ / 7.5] (10)
good PR/jump placement for emphasis. a few more extra 32nds could be added for fun but ok

Revolutions - Copy [? / 2.5]
weird rhythm changes in m8-, m17-, etc.
a lot of misrhythms, no 24ths in this song.

Roki (EnR) [+? / 6]
jacks after m22 don't fit the music well, m30- seems ok but some jack related patterns are bad
use jumptrills in m36/38/42/etc(imperfect layering), m57 is 48ths

Rolling Along (Sprite-) [? / 4]
funny concept, but some parts are quite understepped.
felt jump placement is mostly wrong, PR is sometimes incorrect (especially in jack section).

Saturday [eastsideman09] [? / 3]
misrhythms on m15/17/25/etc, both patterns and rhythms lack consistency IMO
m58-59 is offsync, all 24ths at the end are wrong

Scream of [roki](roundbox) [? / 4]
beginning minijacks aren't PR, PR on m48-49 could be better.
guitars and drums should stepped more consistently. ending 32nds should be 48ths.

Skyfire Ace(EnR) [? / 4.5]
simple parts could be layered consistently (steps for bass sometimes disappear) 
32nds in m43 are 48ths, 48ths in m83 are 32nds. hands aren't needed on this imo

Slashfic [eastsideman09] [? / 3.5]
parts like m21, m25 are understepped.
48th splits in m33, 32nds in m34- aren't needed. some 24ths are misrhythmed.

Space! Wave! Akiba-Pop!! (behanjc) [+. / 6.5] (9)
in m17-24 want more jumps on some 8ths, m25- also a bit weird jump placement
others are fine

Speedcore Sunday (JX) [own file]

Square, Volume, and Amplitude [Resend] (robertsona)  [= / just replace old one]

Starlight (MacGravel) [+. / 7] (10)
climax is fun, PR could be better at parts tho.

Starwolf (Silvuh) [+? / 6]
32nds/jump combination around m60 is weird for playing(plus not very audible), 
end of m41/58/76 could be 32nds. in parts like m69-72 PR could be better

Strawberry Crisis (knuckles2224) [- / 0]
quit out because of the offsyncness

Swallowing an Avalanche (TC_Halogen) [? / 3]
a bit offsync, misrhythms/missing notes/double placement at parts

Tempest (ShirkDeio) [? / 4.5]
some parts are inconsistent/understepped. PR is ok on some parts but could be better.
song should be cut.

The Hero Fiend (Buizel8888) [? / 2.5]
in m12 16th is 24th, m13- want pattern change with 8th jacks, m79-80 should be 24ths
jump/hand placement isn't good, misrhythms in many parts. PR could be better

THE TERROR OF DEATH (cyrx900) [- / 1]
beginning is offsync and gap off after that. also many misrhythms, m102- are 24ths.
some quiet parts should be cut.

ThunderBolt (Frigtionn) [? / 3.5]
some rhythm parts that are missed could be stepped.
32nds on parts like m32 aren't needed, 24th on m53
also if you want to put long jacks, put them on all sequent snare parts.

Titan -The Superjail Mix- (Zap_Track) [? / 3]
missing notes/weird jump placement at parts, also long non-stepped parts are meh (could be cut)

Tokyo Banging [Resend] (robertsona) [= / just replace old one]

Tricky Concert - Ragev1 (Netjet!) [? / 2.5]
offsync, PR should be better

uNdEr YoUr BeD_(dandandamdandan1111) [? / 2]
those 24ths are just weird, also misrhythms in many parts. structure is quite inconsistent.

Versatile (OperationStrawbarry) [? / 2.5]
misrhythms on beginning/middle piano, PR could be better 
12th on m20, 24th on m24/32/etc 

Vida (Izzy) [? / 3.5]
felt some(many) bursts are out of place, some are misrhythms.
32nd trills are kinda gay, need to put 64ths on every hihat(or whatever)?

Virus (Zero054) [- / 0]
no file

William Tell Overture (nev670) [- / 1.5]
bad music seriously. misrythms, PR could be better at parts.

Wish (Reprise) (HammyMcSquirrel) [= / just replace old one]

World End's Yama Xanadu (_.Spitfire._) [? / 4.5]
very long and repetitive, songcut is preferable.
felt rhythms are fine technically, but some parts are quite overlayered for the music.

Xuxa (a_dumple) [? / 4]
overlayered overall, some long jacks are retarded and not technically correct. also 16th jumps.

Xxxperiment_(dandandamdandan1111) [? / 2]
weird jump placement, 16ths don't flow well, overall boring.

Zero Zero Hero (HammyMcSquirrel) [? / 3]
felt inconsistent, PR could be better

Big Blue v2 (hi19hi19) [? / 5]
File's pretty boring without layering IMO, can disregard my opinion for this file though.
24th on m19?, PR is ok but not great.

Chocolate Rain (DJS Remix) (hi19hi19) [- / 0]
offsync as hell, and 64ths are just retarded. quit out.

Endless Maze (hi19hi19) [? / 4.5]
lack of consistency at the beginning (randomly switching the instrument), and difficulty 
overall. 32nds should be 24ths. jacks are interesting though.

Fei Longer (hi19hi19) [+. / 6.5] (9)
gap early/minor bpm errors, but the way of stepping is kinda amusing.

Gradeus v2 (hi19hi19) [+? / 6]
bad sound quality, get better mp3.
180bpm jumpstreams for 2min, that's all. some people would enjoy this for scoring probrally. 

Qu'est ce que c'est(psycho) [? / 4.5]
offsync at parts, decently vocal followed.
not a big fan of 4 minute vocal followed rock file, since there're already plenty of files like this.
at least need to cut, and PR could be better.

Shapeshifter (eastsideman09) [+? / 5.5]

need rhythm/pattern fix of burst on m5, m8-m9. m31-34 is underlayered.
PR could be better on the stream parts going with synth and piano melody.

Silly Symphony [sc979] [? / 5.5]
m77-78 should be all 24ths. misrhythm on m140, 144, 148, 154, 166, etc.
on some jumpstream part, jumps could go with snares.
m168-170 is offsync. cut the song.

Storm Raid Battle (Matrixdude) [? / 4.5]
quads/jacks aren't needed in most cases. parts like m27-28 are 32nds.
also, too many misrhythms/offsync parts overall. PR at the beginning could be better.


The Crow's Eyes (hi19hi19) [+. / 6.5]
missing notes on m27, felt layering for drums is inconsistent. felt a bit long.
semi-accepting it.



Blu's Notes
-trainstation dukeout- (b-a-e-r) [-] - no chart?

13th,Friday (megamon88) [+?] - Understepped in parts, could have better flow, synced ok but could use better bpm choice (3->1)

260 (smartdude1212) [?] - overdoubled and repetative in parts, rolls instead of spins, m42-56 or so needs better sync

3020 (Coolboyrulez0) [?] - needs better PR, many rhythms missed, trills need to change correctly, 16ths are wrong (they should be weird 64ths I think, slow it down to .3 and check), some rhtyhms wrong like in m47, sim needs lots of work

==Planet Karma== (stargroup) [+] - rock section seems overstepped but probably ok

Wild ARMs Town (Redorigami) [-] - some rhtyhms wrong (like m38), overstepped but missed rhythms in quiet part (with only drums, off sync after each slow down, inconsistent layering

A Nightmare before Kefka (?) [-] - hold, needs better PR, pay closer attention to sync (like oboe, or whatever that instrument is), many misrhythms, ending needs better sync

A World of Piano (sc979) [+?] - Good sync, some weird double placement, may have missed a few jacks, some BNS

Air.sul G iRock (behanjc) [+] - layering good, good PR

Balloon Fever v2 (Crayzie) [-] - Easier than original and not as good, bad layering, missed rhythms

Battleman Zero (-Barista-) [-] - missed rhythms, overstepped, long 32nd trill, needless minijacks, this file has potential but needs a lot of work

Big Blue v2 (hi19hi19) [+] - missed a 32nd in m15, PR could be a little better

Blue-Violet (Silvuh) [+?] - some of the 24ths off sync but may be ok as is, because of the layering style some of the single notes that don't go to piano feel out of place

Chariot v2 (JenovaSephiroth) [-] - similar difficulty to one in FFR, weird bpm tricks

Chemical Attraction (AEROJET Mix) (NestleKwik) [+?] - changed gap to -.107, some vocals off sync but could be ok bc of diff

Chocolate Magic (behanjc) [+?] - some layering seems off and the 16th patterns could be better at parts, the one minijack felt out of place for the file

Chocolate Rain (DJS Mix) (hi19hi19) [-] - beginning is lol... overstepped, overlayered to compensate for lol beginning

Chrono Eternit (xxJakexx) [-] - YNS, fix PR and layering, fix patterns, uneven in difficulty, should be 32nd rolls not 24ths

Cloud Control (batistabomb300) [?] - PR could be much better, many rhythms ignored that could be fun, flow could be better, misrhythms m56-57

Concrete Dandelions (TC_Halogen) [?] - many misrhythms (64ths as 32nds is fine), layering needs work

Corneria (Trance Remix) (Coolboyrulez0) [+?] - missed rhythms, inconsistent PR (needs lots of work), 'triplet' section could be better

CRASH the BEAT! (behanjc) [+?] - some missed rhythms in m6, some ignored rhythms thoughout entire file

Crying Soul v2 (Breakdown16) [?] - weird cut but could be ok, missed rhythms throughout file, second half of file could be much better (got very boring)

Damage Control (Mahjix) [?] - fix up sync, missed rhythms, minijacks no good, PR needs work

Dance Off (dtpietrzak) [-] - many manual sync errors, many missed rhythms, song could use a cut for difficulty

DeVouR (Xandertrax) [+?] - could do without 16th jacks, m76 would be better as a roll, m92-93 is a weird pattern

Digital Confession (SulferDragon) [+?] - sync on vocals could be better, missed notes in m116 and m124, weird choice of JS patterns (might be better if the two weren't so 'right handed')

Digital Skies (kpmuzik) [?] - PR needs work, jacks to the drums don't fit, maybe needs cut

Document 13b (FFR Remix) (bluguerrilla) [+] - perfect don't listen to jx

Domhail (Netjet & EAGAMES) [-] - terribly offsync, PR and double placement needs a ton of work

Drop (OperationStrawbarry) [?] - offsync (round up the bpm), some misrhythms and PR needs help

Education (Beethovens_Mask) [-] - missed rhythms, misrhythms, bad cut

Einstein Rosen Bridge Cut (dore) [+?] - change 32nd rolls into 64th rolls (awkward next to 32nd rhythms), some jacks may be over the top, 32nd trill, uneven in difficulty

Electrical Parade (Hairy Cabbage???) [-] - very many misrhythms, minijacks

Endless Maze (hi19hi19) [?] - i don't hear the 32nds in m9-10, misrhythms m11, jacks and 32n trills make difficulty way uneven

Essential Speed (championanwar) [?] - missed some doubles, missed (or left out would be fun) 16th rhythms, bpm increases at end might be better

F (Knoobish) [-] - many misrhythms and missed rhythms (in intro and in jacky part)

Faint (Remix) (_.Spitfire._) [?] - hands make it overstepped and are outside of the difficulty, some missed 64ths that could be fun at this bpm, some doubles to guitar need better PR, many missed rhtyhms, maybe consider cutting...somehow

Fall Foliage (SulferDragon) [+?] - some PR of doubles could be better like m25, some PR of stream could be better like m28, i think you got all of the double placement right but you might want to recheck to make sure

Falsie the Pseudo-Science Girl (behanjc) [+] - fun and simple

Fei Longer (hi19hi19) [+?] - fun, some PR issues in jumpjacks like in m5, missed rhythms in intro (on purpose?), missed rhythms in m9-13

Fire Aura (kjwkjw) [-] - file needs a lot of work, some 16ths go to nothing, some missed rhythms

Footsteps (Crayzie) [?] - some missed rhythms, weird double placement

Forgotten Daze (Theone_one) [-] - many many missed and invented rhythms, minijacks, song needs to be cut by like 2/5

Frozen_Bond (Beethovens_Mask) [-] - many missed and misrhythms, weird double placement, bad PR

Funktacular (dore) [+] - lol funktacular

Geno's Forest F-Zero v2 (MrPopadopalis25) [-] - needs to be harder for a v2, many missed rhythms

Gig the Alternative (behanjc+stargroup) [+?] - good enough sync to guitar, not sure about 16th jacks m86 and hands, don't hear the 24th trill in m100, ending to keyboard is wrong

Gradeus v2 (hi19hi19) [-] - lol just a tad overstepped

Gyermeteg (Dragoonhead) [?] - missed rhythms and some PR jacks are wrong, ending synced wrong, bpm is wrong (should be flat 160 i think)

Hardcore Bass (cyrx900) [?] - song needs to be cut, overdoubled, inconsistent doubling

here we go (jimerax) [+] - 1st

Here We Go (stargroup100) [+?] - 2nd

HereWeGo(psychozerosk8er) [?] - 3rd

Highway Star (Knoobish) [-] - many unjustified 16th jacks, dumb handstream

Hyper Highspeed Star (Izzy) [?] - holds, 32nd roll instead of jumptrill would be better, weird double placement, could use cut

I am Maid (npv) [?] - 32nds to nothing m44, m68 lol, ending offsync, way overlayered

I Want Candy (-barista-) [-] - many many many rhythms to nothing

Integraation (bluguerrilla then SulferDragon) [+] best file ever

IVALTEK (three17s) [?] - ending stream waay too hard compared to the rest of the file, manual sync isn't right, rhythms (gallops) wrong, should be no 12th stream anywhere, bpm off

Jingle Bells (Frigtionn) [-] - jacks, misrhythms, overdoubled, hold

Kanon-Kanon (bmah) [+] - kinda overdoubled, this is more of a +. than a +

Lady's Cake (DarkbearX & HammyMcSquirrel) [+?] - would be better without the minijacks and jacks caused by 32nd patterns, and that one yellow jump

Last Boss Battle Theme #2 (SulferDragon) [+?] - a handful of places where 32nds should be 48ths, some sections with strange doulbe placement, overall ok

Lawn Wake IV v2 (t-rogdor) [-] - wrong in many ways, misrhythms, missed rhythms, bad layering, similar difficulty to the one in game

Leeroy Jenkins (fun times mix) (Silver_Brian) [+?] - 16ths in m17 are really quiet, misrhythm m30, some strange double placement but it might work

lightfoot (stargroup) [+] - missed a purple m83 and maybe a couple measures after as well, interesting layering technique, more of a +. than a +

lolhappy (HammyMcSquirrel) [?] - Not sure about the section with the rhythms that go to nothing, free form stream to the cymbal might be better, some weird double placement

Lolit Speed (xxJakexx) [-] many missed rhythms, bpm needs doubling, weird double placement, YNS

Lunatic Princess (npv) [?] - missed and misrhythms in section m53 on, overlayered

Malicious Fingers (Cyanite) [?] - sync in m23 needs to be much better, inconsistent jack placement, missed rhythm m31, needs 20 seconds cut from beginning, you can't just gap it out, sync wong m91, m129+ many misrhythms (i hear no 24ths), m140-144 are 16ths, end bpm changes wrong, inconsistent layering (hands out of nowhere)

Marisa Stole The Precious Thing (Ravia) [-] - m24-25 no 12ths, PR needs work, many missed and ignored rhythms and misrhythms, cut could be better

MaXx AttaXx v2 (championanwar) [-] - missed rhythms, very similar to original

Mike French Hardcore Custom (t-rogdor) [-] - bad PR, bad layering, bad rhythm usage, bad

Mirror (nev670) [-] - YNS, missed rhythms and misrhythms, quit out

Music (Serialization) [-] - wrong gallops (should be yellow-red not red-pink), many missed rhythms, needs better layering and PR

Ninja Lad (megamon88) [?] - missed rhythms (mainly in sections that go to keyboard, where you have tow yellows in a row), doubles need better PR,

NthDegree (Cyanite) [?] - once again 20 seconds of blank space at beginning is a lot, some sections need a lot of work in terms of sync and rhythm, file feels incomplete

One Minute Waltz v2 (JX) [+] - great sync, good PR for this layering technique

One Thousand Cranes v2 (Xiaounlimited) [?] - misrhythm m6, some PR mistakes, ending steps go on too long (roll would be better), sync seems shaky,

Operation_Evolution (flipsta_lombax) [?] - beginning stream PR (jacks for no reason for example), guitar needs better sync, more rhythms and better PR, lots of PR problems

Osakanajigoku (trumaestro) [-] - many missed rhythms and misrhythms, needs better sync on instruments, needs better layering

OSTER Project Presents World Tour 2004 (behanjc) [+] - awesome, it's like EPCOT: the videogame, good PR, good layering, nice choice in what rhythms to step etc

PacMania (customstuff) [-] - i highly doubt those bpm changes, even for a very short song it was boring, make it better

Pacsyndrome (bmah) [+?] - should end on a red?, wasn't sure about all of the double placement m49-63, sounds like you missed a red note in sections like m66, m80 sounds more like a trill, go over your rhythms to drums

PAL,36 (trumaestro & flipsta_lombax) [?] - overlayered, minijacks to nothings, weird double/triple placement

Perfect Insanity (Silver_Brian) [?] - overall pretty good but the solo needs to be better PR (not like guitar hero but better!), the double placement seems really strange

Procrastination on a Paper (dag12) [+?] - similar to silvuh's but had some misrhythms

Procrastination on a Paper (Silvuh) [+] - liked this one better

Pure Hatred (t-rogdor) [-] - random jacks, ignored many rhythms in the drums, many misrhythms, this file could be a lot better, 24th jumpstream to a scream?

Qu'est ce que c'est(psycho) [+?] - sync on vocals needs a little work and you missed a handful of rhythms in the vocals

Rainspark (Silver_Brian) [+?] - more attention to PR in triplets (FFR sense) would be better, missed rhythms in the intro

Randomness Reactor III (Kommisar[os]) [+] - simfile good, song's high freq's hurt my ears :-(

Revolutions (Izzy) [?] - misrhythms in intro, patterns could be better (even if it is just an index file), misrhythms (no 24ths), some PR in the doubles would be good, superfluous slowdown and stop

Roki (EnR) [+?] - section m28-33 should never have more than minijacks (2 arrows in a row), sections to guitar would be better without double to snare, 32nd jack in ending lol

Rolling Along (Sprite-) [?] - lol, song sounds like a cat had a seizure on a midi keyboard, don't understand the double placement most of the time, honestly it could use more jacks, needs more PR in the stream because of the jacks, m53 doesn't make sense, needs either more or no hands

Saturday (eastsideman09) [+?] - m33 missed rhythm, all 24ths should be 32nds, i think you also missed some of the 32nd rhythms, m145 PR doubles

Scream of [roki] (roundbox) [?] - not as good as EnR's, some PR to guitar isn't right (minijacks next to long jacks), almost better guitar patterns than EnR's

Shapeshifter (eastsideman09) [?] - missed some 8th note rhythms, minijacks are hard compared to the rest of the file, 3 note stream doesn't fit the music,

Silly Symphony (sc979) [?] - 16ths in m77-78 (and m217-218) are wrong (should be 24ths), missing notes in rhythms like m94, m166 should be 32nds not 24ths, not sure about 24ths to guitar (very distorted, hard to tell), harp needs better sync (should be easy since you can hear it at .3x), song could use a cut (maybe after harp? or before it you're feeling lazy)

Skyfire Ace (EnR) [+?] - hands, m67 PR, m83 should be 32nds not 48ths

Slashfic (eastsideman09) [?] - m33 wrong manual sync (should be one 16th gallop and two doubles), m58 no 24ths, overall PR could be much better as well as double placement

Space! Wave! Akiba-Pop!! (behanjc) [+?] - m19 (and the other m like it) misrhythmed but 64ths probably are too much, m78 3 arrow pattern would fit better, some double placement in vocal section wrong (doubles to no vocals), ignored rhythms (might be overstepped not ignored though)

Speedcore Sunday (JX) [+] - this file is a lot of fun and i didn't find any mistakes

Square, Volume, and Amplitude (robertsona) [?] - some wrong 8th note rhythms, some missed 16th note rhythms, missed '32nd' rhythms in slowdown sections, missed rhythm m32, a little PR in the 8th rhythms would make this funner,

Starlight (MacGravel) [+] - very fun

Starwolf (Silvuh) [+?] - mostly good, don't understand some of the double placement, sections like m15 that have 16ths to drums feel out of place but probably ok, layering in JS section should match the layering in non-JS section like m24, not sure about m39 rhythms (can't really hear it, maybe ask KgZ?)

Storm Raid Battle (Matrixdude) [?] - m24 not 24ths (16ths?), hands and quads don't fit, many misrhythms in break section, jacks out of nowhere, jacky stream patterns, more misrhythms after break section and after it

Strawberry Crisis (knuckles2224) [-] - many many misrhythms, quit out, artist?

Swallowing an Avalanche (TC_Halogen) [?] - some misrhythms (slow it down to .5 and go over all of the 16th rhythms, not sure about, m40 could be JS, minijacks out of nowhere, bpm should be constant pretty sure, some missed doubles, some weird double placement

Tempest (ShirkDeio) [-] - you need to either step all of the 16th rhythms or none of them not just a little, 8th stream gets really boring, bad double placement

The Crow's Eyes (hi19hi19) [+?] - m10 m14 m30 etc missed or misplaced 48th rhythms, m45 and m107 no yellow note, missed 48th last measure

The Hero Fiend (Buizel8888) [-] - many ignored rhythms in drums, bad PR in doubles, unstepped guitar in stream, misrhytms in guitar (24th trill doesn't make sense), many more misrhythms quit out

THE TERROR OF DEATH (cyrx900) [?] - misrythms in sections where you put a 32nd, there should be zero bpm changes, 16th stream wrong (should be 24th stream), needs cut, lots of blank space

ThunderBolt (Frigtionn) [?] - m65 needs a lot of work, some weird double placement, some missed rhythms, needs a lot of cleaning up but isn't bad

Titan -The Superjail Mix- (Zap_Track) [?] - inconsistent doubling, after break is very understepped (it could be so much fun!)

Tokyo Banging (robertsona) [+?] - m60 24ths, m61 48th, cut is meh

Tricky Concert - Ragev1 (Netjet!) [+?] - PR could be much better for a classical song

uNdEr YoUr BeD_(dandandamdandan1111) [-] - 24ths don't go to anything, many misrhythms, needs better layering, PR could be much better

Versatile (OperationStrawbarry) [?] - bpm is constant, misrhythms in intro, stream could be better, 24th rolls should be 32nds, many missed and misrhythms

Vida (Izzy) [-] - many many many rhythm mistakes, needs a ton of work

Virus (Zero054) [-] - blank

William Tell Overture (nev670) [-] - bpm wrong, horrible PR and layering, quit out

Wish (Reprise) (HammyMcSquirrel) [?] - some PR would be nice, many misrhythms and weird layering

World End's Yama Xanadu (_.Spitfire._) [?] - misrhythms to synth in sections like m60-61, sooo long (and it basically repeats)..., rhythms in m148 go to nothing?, so overstepped...

Xuxa v2 (a_dumple) [?] - long jacks that don't fit, many missed rhythms, way overstepped

Xxxperiment_(dandandamdandan1111) [?] - 16th stream to nothing, talking will get cut off without an ending note

Zero Zero Hero (HammyMcSquirrel) [+?] - some rhythms in drums missed, some 8th note rhythms wrong, PR could be better

{Lazy Summer Days} (Xandertrax) [+?] - patterns to 24th bursts could be better, intro could be cut (before piano or something), some missed notes in 8th note JS section

{The Sewers} (Arrowhead Stadium) [-] - many many misrhythms, minijacks that go to nothing, halved bpm, quit out

{Wildflower} (blazelust) [?] - intro all wrong, 16th rhythms wrong m41+, long jacks that go to nothing, boring m49+, simfile needs lots of work but is salvageable

~Progress~ (three17s) [] - horrible patterns (needs better PR), missed some rhythms, inconsistent layering
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