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Old 05-13-2013, 07:51 PM   #38
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Default Re: Songs of the Week (May 11, 2013)

Look, it isn't about being different, it is about effort. Add percussion, change up the rhythms, just.. do something else. It doesn't sound like you tried hard at all, that's all there is to it.

If you really are genuinely concerned about how it sounds, ask other musicians. There is plenty of them here on FFR that can give you tips, but don't play the victim because people criticized you.
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