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Old 06-22-2020, 09:32 PM   #76
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Default Re: Official Tournament 13 Batch Notes

Judge:TC_Halogen

Cobra Commander (ositzxz369) [8.5/10]
Artist: Venetian Snares -- Perms: OK

- 1.936: missing 16th
- 10.641: could make this a [R] to capture both of the hi-hats
- 16.952/24.452/etc: percussion notes missing here, there are others but they’re not extremely noticeable
- 17.605: might be good to make a burst here
- 33.476: 32nd burst colliding into a triple at this speed is highly ill-advised
- 40.976: same as 33.476
- 48.476/etc: same as 33.476, in general you shouldn’t have a 32nd burst at this speed running into triples because it always forces a minijack on a column that is basically guaranteed to be a 2-framer
- this ending sounds like complete horse shit
- despite my disdain for the end of the song, I will say that this chart is quite well polished and the only qualms I’ve got are those bursts into triples; rhythms are perfect and everything is highly coherent

Eccentric ghost channel as Poltergeist (VisD) [8/10]
Artist: cybermiso -- Perms: OK (provided)

- 17.654: missing note for bass synth
- 21.990: this is REALLY mean given the difficulty of the song; that forces a one handed trill at 256 BPM 16ths for 8 notes
- 25.154/etc: missing note for bass synth - find the others and fix them
- 1:17.185: if you’re following the scratches, this should be delayed a bit more (falls on the 32nd afterward)
- 1:18.357: missing note
- 1:19.412: should be x--x--x-x 64ths, that’d be blue, green, orange, red
- 1:23.513: missing notes for scratch
- this is a pretty fun file overall; please consider being a bit less rude with that OHT at 21.990 - I don’t think it’s reject worthy but it is a pretty tough difficulty spike to deal with

Gentleman (Areia Remix) (hi19hi19) [7.5/10]
Artist: Areia Creations -- Perms: OK

- 15.520: move this to [LR] to separate the snare/bass properly -- I know this jump has both but the bass comes much more clearly so it seems fair to give more precedence to it
- 32.663: this one triple stands out as erroneous compared to the rest of the section
- 59.448: seems like your relevance got a little messed here; might want to shuffle patterns around to get it fixed up
- there’s not many mistakes with the structure presented overall, but I do feel like the usage of jumps can be a bit better with regards to properly accenting percussion in the earlier part of the song, and the lyrics in the later parts.
- well executed given what’s presented within the song, but could use a bit more.

Mad Maestro (trumaestro) [6/10]
Artist: Devin Martin -- Perms: OK

- greaterthancolonopenparenthesis.sm
- 29.790: not sure why this is a mini one-handed trill compared to others
- 50.790: missing jump
- 55.904: jump really doesn’t belong here
- 1:00.063: no need for this minijack here; vocal sample doesn’t repeat here, it repeats at 59.790
- 1:02.108: shouldn’t there technically be a jump here too?
- 1:08.040/1:08.313/1:08.586:
- 1:10.699: ghost note
- 1:11.108: missing jump
- 1:16.972: this should take precedence in your layering
- 1:17.381: this longer sequence of down arrows kinda implies something should be followed, but you have numerous melodies changing in pitch
- 1:19.836/1:24.199: missing jump
- 1:34.154: this note has been accented throughout the drop, but is missing here
- 1:47.472: missing note for vocals here, it seems a bit strange to omit given that it’s a pretty familiar motif within your chart structure
- 2:01.290: bass starts a bit faster then tapers off; straight 48ths here is noticeably off
- 2:04.927: same deal with the missing vocal
- 2:14.381: missing jump for kick; I get accenting the synth but you can still catch the percussion you’ve been following with a single note here without issue
- 2:18.609: you had an earlier accent with this as three jumps, so this is a structural inconsistency
- while your audio file says 320kbps, this sounds far from that; I’ve listened to this song from other sources and your audio sounds noticeably more tinny/lower quality
- don’t quite feel like the chart does enough to really be interesting until the 1:10 mark or so
- a little draggy and the audio quality seems very muddy

Zygorous Distribution [8.5*/10]
Artist: Aquellex -- Perms: OK

- 34.016/etc: some missing jumps maybe?
* 1:31.551: I get the accent, but I think at this speed, you’re gonna have to compromise with splitting that apart on different hands as opposed to LLDD or RRUU
* 1:33.480/1:33.909/etc: ^
- file’s super hard. Nothing more to say about that.
- CQ with the minijack changes
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