[Shadow_God_10]

Okay I'm a little more anal than most people when it comes to making files so, as always, I'll give a fair shot at it... I'm at work atm so I can't exactly review the ENTIRE file but here's what I have going for you for the first 20 seconds

05.439s-06.971s: See that quarter note you have above the freeze? you could move that to a 1 as opposed to a 2, that way the 8th note you have before the quarter will be the same as they would both be related to the snare

10.545s-11.056s- non-existent 8th note, remove that

12.587s-13.098s- same as above

13.098s-13.609s- Okay I'm a little confused here... are you going with the guitar or the drums in this section here? if you want consistency I'd remove the 24ths for the guitar as earlier you've been going with the drums and guitar as layering. That bit I agree with as I'd do the same thing because it works and, well, they're the only two instruments that stand out. if you want to use the guitar remove the 16th/32nd drum bit and finish the guitar lick with 4/3/2/1. so you'd have 24ths going 1/2/3/4/3/2/1 then the next measure.

16.417s-19.736s: this long freeze is understandable however it can be replaced with the drum build going 2/3/2/3/2/3 then layer in the quarter bass kick as a 1. that would improve the overall flow of the song because there's not a pregnant pause between sections.

I'll review the whole file when I get home.