06-13-2009, 10:01 PM
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Join Date: Mar 2009
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Re: "Orphans" a holocaust poem (slightly graphic)
good poem. I was trying to figure out how the tone of the poem would change if instead he didn't turn away while keeping the line "No one cries for orphans." hm.....
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