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**championanwar** · 09-11-2007, 07:17 AM

Why did you stop there! I want to hear more!
It is a bit differant and that is what gives the story it's edge. There are just a few mistakes which other people have already pointed out, so i will not waste your time by going over them again. However for 13 years old, that is a great standard. Keep it going, and i can't wait for the rest to come.

09-11-2007, 07:17 AM	#11
championanwar Ask Nuro! x3 Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: England. Age: 32 Posts: 2,588	Re: Into the Cave Why did you stop there! I want to hear more! It is a bit differant and that is what gives the story it's edge. There are just a few mistakes which other people have already pointed out, so i will not waste your time by going over them again. However for 13 years old, that is a great standard. Keep it going, and i can't wait for the rest to come. Last edited by championanwar; 09-11-2007 at 07:23 AM.. Reason: I missed out a bit when i replied the first time