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kitkat9 · 04-24-2009, 11:58 PM

Just like Engler said it is something seen a million times, but don't take that too personally, we all have done it at least once in our lives.

I really like the flow of the poem. It would be appreciated if there was a little more punctuation. Why is spelled wrong "whi" no biggy though.

Truthfully there isn't much wrong at all. It is well put together, there could be a few different word choices to make a bigger impact on the reader. But overall great.

04-24-2009, 11:58 PM	#6
kitkat9 FFR Player Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: San Antonio ~!(210)!~ Age: 29 Posts: 87	Re: The Reasons Just like Engler said it is something seen a million times, but don't take that too personally, we all have done it at least once in our lives. I really like the flow of the poem. It would be appreciated if there was a little more punctuation. Why is spelled wrong "whi" no biggy though. Truthfully there isn't much wrong at all. It is well put together, there could be a few different word choices to make a bigger impact on the reader. But overall great.