[XelNya]

Originally Posted by bmah

ULTRAnumb (Metal Revision) / XelNya
rating: 8*/10
- I noticed this chart follows the instruments more than the lyrics, and this is perfectly ok; you're also consistent about it.
- 41.87s,47.35s,96.72s,107.69s: jumps on the 8th here according to guitar riff (shouldn't need a jump at 42.04s,47.52s,107.86s)
- 88.83s: jump
- 148.91s,152.08s: missing notes
- 149.17s: 16th drums begin here
- 151.31s,155.42s,156.79s,159.54s,159.88s: extraneous notes
- 161.17-163.56s: quite a bit of extraneous notes, much like the above. Where are these additional 16ths coming from? I just hear 16ths in groups of three notes, nothing more.
- 188.08s,188.76s: yikes, what's with the minijacks from these jumps, and so late into the song too? Adjust the jumps so that they don't result in minijacks.
- Summary: Solid rock file, for the most part. Please check out what I think are ghost 16ths in the 2nd half of the song, but most importantly take out the minijacks at 188.08s and 188.76s.

All notes were followed pretty much except for the extra note comment @159.88 - that 16th is there on .5 and .3 for me.

Originally Posted by bmah

The Nature of Dying / XelNYa ft. Icyworld
rating: 7/10
- 4.48s,4.92s,11.58s,23.51s,30.53s,91.40s,91.67s,97.72s,99.30s,99.82s,100.53s,108.95s,113.51s,137.81s,144.82s: there are a number of barely audible or nonexistent sounds (ghost notes) and these should be omitted
- 9.48s,13.51s: missing 16th
- 24.47s: 32nds, not 24ths
- 24.83s: no 8th here. Also, the burst is comprised of three 32nds starting at 24.91s.
- 25.70s,26.23s: colored arrows seem pretty arbitrary
- 46.75s: jump
- 70.09-74.82: some incorrect steps to the drum patterns early on and missing hi hats
- 81.58s,85.88s,91.14s,105.53s: missing notes
- 91.75s: should be a two-arrow jack
- 96.67s: I expected the jump to be the following 8th, not the 16th, felt a bit weird
- 107.89s,109.82s: arbitrary 16th jump
- 114.30s: arbitrary minijack
- 136.93s: instead of 32nd jumps, how about a single arrow to the 64th sound instead
- 146.23-147.10s: the minijacks created from these patterns aren't necessary. Adjust the jumps here.
- Summary: On a preliminary playthrough, this chart seems fine, and it plays fine for the most part. The jacks weren't too much of a problem as I understand this is likely a main feature of the chart, though I would recommend placing more right-handed jacks (up, right) as opposed to left-handed ones (e.g. down arrows). I first noticed some minor technicalities, but upon investigation they really added up to the point where I ended up with a laundry list of them, both in regards to missing notes and extraneous ones. You'll need a fair bit more polish, but the chart overall looks promising.

With the exception of:

11.58s, 91.40s, 91.67s, 99.30
"- 25.70s,26.23s: colored arrows seem pretty arbitrary" They're from Icy's file, I just kept them because I like them.

I sent them through the update feature? I hope that's about right.