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Old 12-9-2012, 10:38 PM   #297
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Default Re: Show your sketching!

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Originally Posted by Spenner View Post
Mahjix your shit is awesome. Really solid, and groovy style. My nitpick is that the background is rather distracting, and that a sense of depth isn't very strongly portrayed with the coins (same colour palette with each coin despite the differences in perspective (at least, similar enough to not look very widespread)).

Also, the splattery outlines are neat but something a bit more organic and energy-looking would convey the concept a bit stronger.

Keep up the good work though, everything else is great.
Spenner, you are absolutely %200 correct! I was very disappointed with how the background panned out. When I submitted this in my deviantART I thought to myself, "I don't like the green splatters... I should make it smokey instead." And YES! I do think the coins should convey some sort of depth. V2 is now in the works. Thank you sir!

Also, LOL m0de! I was about to say, "ALREADY!?" Hahaha Thanks!
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