[psychoangel691]

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Howlin' Pumpkin {brz1128} (gold stinger)
Rating: 5.5/10 [+?]
- offset is fine
- 5.658: listen to the melody again - proper PR would be something like 1-12-23 (you do something like this later in the song)
- 9.301/etc: this note being connected to the jump makes it look like there might be some melodic relevance for the decision here, but there's not. This is opposed to 16.587/20.015, where the connections make much more sense.
- 15.515 to 29.229: with respect to the three 4th note jumps that appear intermittently throughout this section, the first jumps are incorrect as the melody plays four 8th notes starting on the up-beat of beat 2 (-xxxx...-xxxx). The exception to this is the last sequence of each phrase where there are blips of 24th note swing (21.515, 28.372)
- 30.015/(etc): either these need to be removed for not being a more direct follower of primary musical elements, or you need to add the missing ones that exist if you're trying to use far in the background sounds to maintain a pace (in this case, add at 31.729, 35.158, 38.587, etc)
- 42.087: see 2:18.087 for an acceptable implementation of a pattern that avoids the pitch relevant mini-jacks that is similar to this one; mirror if you have to or whatnot - the best motion here is likely a variant of this galloping pattern that you've used later on
- 46.158/etc: move to L (pitch relevance correction)
- 53.229: this is cute, I like it
- 57.944: why do you accommodate for melody + kicks at 1:02.658, but not here?
- 1:13.587: similar to 46.158
- 1:24.087: the next 8 measures are a direct copy/paste from an earlier section, and the next section of 8 is while not quite copy-paste, still has many similar patterns with minimal changes
- 1:51.515: this section is almost mostly copy-paste
- 2:05.229: also quite copy-pasty, though not quite as much
- all errors found in earlier sections apply to their copy/pasted sections
- can't consciously accept this personally, it seems a bit on the lazier side with regards to presentation and has some noticeable things that can be fixed