04-28-2014, 01:51 PM
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rain of memories...
Join Date: Oct 2012
Location: Washington (state)
Age: 30
Posts: 2,952
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Re: Rumor of the Gemstones: Exploration Edition
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Originally Posted by MracY
Try to write sentences non-ambiguously, unless it's on purpose.
Although I don't mind wearing a beautiful, white, silky robe.
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Thank you for the advice. I would try to be more precise in my language, but in my opinion, ambiguous sentences tend to flow more naturally in creative writing. If I reworded the sentence you pointed out, it would read, "MracY voices to the caretaker, who is wearing a beautiful white, silky robe, that he would like some food." If you have any examples of precise language that would sound more natural in the English language, then please show me. As of now, though, I will make sure to only write ambiguously when the possibility is expected. In addition, you may always ask about ambiguous phrases when you're unsure what I mean to convey.
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Originally Posted by MracY
Does time flow equally between all players?
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Yes, each update counts as one day for every player.
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Originally Posted by MracY
You also seem to have not that many people who are playing right now.
Maybe you can get some more, if you want.
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I would love to have more players; anyone is allowed to join at any time.
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Originally Posted by hosua
Oh, I thought it was just my internet this whole time.
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Originally Posted by rushyrulz
Also that triple post is almost as delicious as a hot, fresh, Domino's pizza.
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Originally Posted by aperson
can y'all take a break and kiss
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(the first section of this chapter)
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5125582...sokyo-no-Jinja
Last edited by drizzleRomanceGirl; 04-28-2014 at 02:04 PM..
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