05-1-2019, 09:31 PM
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Picker @ JAX2
Join Date: Aug 2011
Posts: 505
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Re: TWG CLXXXV: C9+++++++++ Game Thread
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Originally Posted by flashflash account
There once were some posts by inD
Had nothing to do with me
He sounds so aloof
That he must be a woof
I'd lynch him o'er this, do you see?
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iambic pentameter is only bad when you're trying to force your speech into it and over-emphasize it. it's not bad if you're just reading because that's when it produces a nicer rhythm
i just recently had a meter/format discussion with someone and wondered aloud whether poetic structure is just controlled suffering
ostensibly a twg game is happening here, but one of like few thoughts i've had so far is "we're really doing this again huh"
which i assume you meant to nip in the bud with the BM comment, but that makes me wonder why you're self-analyzing this early instead of having the read on its own, because the rhyme is a little awkward
at this point maybe i'm just happy you actually explained it though
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