06-5-2013, 03:12 AM
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FFR Player
Join Date: Aug 2005
Age: 28
Posts: 3,996
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Re: poem a day
thanks for the feedback. I too think it sounds a lot better with a bit more ambiguity, I'll keep that in mind in the future.
too lazy to repost all of my stuff here, but the site will continue to stay updated!
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