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Old 10-30-2019, 02:43 PM   #5
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Default Re: Holiday Special Batch Set 1

gold stinger hopped on these for me (THANK YOU!) ZzZ he said is going to need more notes so it's not complete yet but I want to get up what I can since Halloween is tomorrow.

Cloak Steppin (ositzxz369) [8.5*/10]
> Sync is good (No changes necessary).
> No issues found within simfile properties. No issues found within simfile folder contents.
-[00:35.624] Could maybe use a jump here, what you have here works for the pattern though.
-[01:01.758] That is extremely spicy on the right hand.
(Please Fix)-[01:24.036 -> 01:25.522] vocal syllable stresses do not match up with the 192nd colorized notes here, especially in the later half, with the final white note being a whole 16th off, making it very awkward to both hit, and listen to.

*PERSONAL NOTES*
Love the breakcore rap genre. Reminds me of another certain rap song that got in recently, but a lot less ‘rude’. Colorization abound, only real issue is some vocal 192nds being set to 8th & 16ths in one section when vocals slow down during it, putting them off-sync. The file only really needs a fix there. Everything else is fine.

Lycanthrope (M0nkeyz) [7/10]
> Sync is good (No changes necessary).
> No issues found within simfile properties. May need to change property ‘artist’ (DanJohansen) to include a space. No issues found within simfile folder contents.
-[00:26.650] Ghost 4th. Same section as 00:23.007 -> 00:23.650, but not present.
-[01:27.721, 01:34.578] These 8ths here are the same as the immediately following 4ths in the song. Would suggest filling them in.
-[01:27.935] Missing 4th jump. Should be a [23].
-[01:30.292] The 8th later on with the same pattern is filled in at 01:37.150. Suggest either filling in this 8th as well, or removing the 8th at 01:37.150 for consistency.
-[01:44.221] Maybe something to reflect pitch relevance here going in the opposite direction?

*PERSONAL NOTES*
Another out of Dan Johansen’s album that flows really fine within 16th sections, and makes for some nice technical. A few issues across the board with missing/ghost notes, and consistency. Very solid.

Once Upon a Time in Transylvania (bmah) [8.5/10]
> Sync is good (No changes necessary).
> No issues found in simfile properties. ‘.dwi’ file found in simfile folder contents. Suggest removing.
-[00:33.517 -> 00:37.910] Those are uh, those are some trills.
-[01:34.798] Missing hard 12th, or 32nd if needed to streamline alongside other notes in this section. Same caliber as the other 12th in this section.
-[02:18.706] Missing 32nd, unsure why it wasn’t filled in. Pretty major yet fun pattern at this speed. There’s a few other 32nds here that have been omitted for what I would identify is the reason for doing so, but the 32nd at 02:18.484 is a powerful pattern starter.

*PERSONAL NOTES*
Ridiculously fun song to play. Guitar solo is ravenously fast. Nothing compromising in the charting, but the trills at the intro are definitely going to be leaving some people screaming for holy water. Looking forward to seeing this one.

The Great Pumpkin Tapes (Psychotik) [6.5/10]
> Sync is good (No changes necessary).
> No issues found in simfile properties. No issues found in simfile folder contents.
-[00:13.522, 00:24.890, 00:41.943] Should be a 12th, instead of 16th. Reflects a lot of what the pattern is in the 2nd half of the song.
-[00:20.627 -> 00:20.943] Remove the 12th & 24th here, replace with 16th.
-[00:42.206] Early 12th. Should be a 24th here, at 00:42.311.
-[00:46.416] Missing 12th?
-[01:25.258] Missing 24th?
-[01:32.311] Possible missing 4th. Could let it slide based on quietness here.
-[01:43.258] Missing 12th.

*PERSONAL NOTES*
Beautiful to-listen-to piece. There’s also a few 16th positions within the file that could be filled in as well that were left out, 00:51.101 and 01:22.048 for example. Could be interesting to experiment with, but not all go with the pattern flow in this piece. Quite a few missing notes here, but nothing unmanageable.

Who's the Spook (ositzxz369) [9/10]
> Sync is good (No changes necessary).
> No issues found in simfile properties. No issues found within simfile folder contents.
-[01:04.281 -> 01:05.281] Might not be all that necessary for the singles in this section. The song is at 210bpm, so these are undoubtedly going to be hit as hands, and personally would make more sense as only jumps.

*PERSONAL NOTES*
Sounds quite similar to the other submission in this batch (Cloak Steppin). This one is definitely a lot more clean. Really hard to nitpick this. On opinion side, if both files do get in, the releases should be split for these.

Wicked Laboratory (AutotelicBrown) [9.5/10]
> Sync is good (No changes necessary).
> No issues found in simfile properties (Pretty generic mp3 name though). No issues found within simfile folder contents.
-[00:46.194 -> 00:47.319] Sounds like there’s supposed to be 16th streams for this bit as well, but stays rather quiet until after this part.
-[00:51.319] Missing 12th, not that bad as it’s a starting 12th.
-[01:46.194] I love it.

*PERSONAL NOTES*
If there was such a thing as a ‘traditional Halloween song’, then this would be it. Guaranteed to give you your daily dose of ‘Nightmare Before Christmas’ vibes. Also a plentiful mixture of 16ths and 12ths to keep people on their toes, with that ‘indescribable Halloween chaos’ jitter to it. This is a Halloween song.
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