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Arch0wl · 04-20-2015, 06:28 AM

interesting story. can't offer much in the way of useful feedback except that I liked the way you described people and the transition from two guys hanging in front of a bar to santa rampaging everything possibly wasn't as clear and big as you'd expect.

definitely not my genre though, but I'm glad you're writing anyway and wish you the best.

04-20-2015, 06:28 AM	#26
Arch0wl Banned Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: fb.com/a.macdonald.iv Age: 35 Posts: 6,344	Re: So, I'm a writer now interesting story. can't offer much in the way of useful feedback except that I liked the way you described people and the transition from two guys hanging in front of a bar to santa rampaging everything possibly wasn't as clear and big as you'd expect. definitely not my genre though, but I'm glad you're writing anyway and wish you the best.