04-13-2007, 05:36 PM
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Use me as a porta-potty
Join Date: Dec 2006
Age: 30
Posts: 4,319
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Re: Into the Cave
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Originally Posted by vvav
In general, a decent story for someone who's only 13.
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Pretty funny that he says "for someone who's only 13" when he is.
Although i do agree, there were some grammar mistakes, but i really don't mind 1st person.
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Originally Posted by Jem
Jem is my name. No one else is the same!
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You're Aja Leith of the Holograms! You're very exotic, intelligent and sophisticated.
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