06-18-2009, 03:28 PM
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FFR Player
Join Date: May 2009
Location: Suwannee, GA
Age: 30
Posts: 49
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Re: All poetry here :)
Cool. I guess i'll post second. This is an original poem I wrote while thinking about a bunch of proverbs.
An eye for an eye
and we'd all be blind
to the beauty placed here for us to behold;
By a single word from a wise old man.
He sees sitting down,
what we fail to from the mountain,
that all that glitters is not gold.
For though two wrongs don't make a right,
they inevitably spawn revenge.
-Midnighter
I'm not really sure what i was trying to say, so tell me what it says to you.
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