05-29-2009, 03:18 AM
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Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: Regina, SK, Canada
Age: 34
Posts: 1,436
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Re: "Orphans" a holocaust poem (slightly graphic)
Good poem. I liked the dark tone and also how the speaker had a comprehension of the doom that was to befall him/her. So often, children are portrayed as innocent and ignorant in poetry; your poem bears a nice contrast and gives the speaker a mature appeal.
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