12-4-2005, 06:20 PM
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Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: Northeasterly
Age: 34
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RE: Welcome to New Haven (Part 1)
I won't bother to read it before it's finished, but can you tell us what the genre is, or something? The title really doesn't show genre (not that it should). From skimming very lightly, it seems that it's set in the future, and I'm not thinking this is New Haven, CT. Plus, I found some errors that could use fixin'.
That's all, keep writing.
[EDIT] Thanks
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