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Originally Posted by James May

Would cutting the first half and keeping the second half be okay?

Also, ya need someone to delve deep into the music stuff :U

I'd recommend cutting both chorus sections in half, might be a bit tedious to edit though.

Yggdrasil
-This is good yes. Lots of really cool parts, beginning is a little mine heavy but that might be a bit subjective to my tastes. Only complaint otherwise, similar to your last submission, some holds are sustained a little too long at times (or perhaps too frequent) that kinda forces a weird flow to the file. It's not a huge deal though.

Heart Gear
-Clean up the 32nd patterns (make them a little more consistent throughout the file too) and shorten the holds at the holdstream section (it's insane with the 32nds mixed in lmao). Rest is good.

also would anyone want to test my file? I'd like some outer critics