[megamon88]

ok so you have a lot of good ideas but your mixing needs some work imo (maybe because i was just listening to darren styles and gammer's remix of sad machine lol)

some of your sounds aren't quite "full", like the reverb is really weird

the sidechain release is a bit long for my tastes and the kick should be punchier on the high end

the composition is pretty reminiscent of some doujin arranges i've heard so i think that's a good thing