07-31-2014, 04:04 PM
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Join Date: Nov 2006
Location: Canada
Age: 31
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Re: Shoe's Graphic Schoppee
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Originally Posted by Coolboyrulez0
Id move the Koreck a little more up and to the left so that the text can breathe a bit more
otherwise nice improvements and good work friend
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I agree, though moreover I think the position should instead find a way to be integrated into the left 3rd portion. Just too weird with heirchy stretching out so far like it is.
The graphics are nice though. I really dig kaioku one, love the style. I will say one thing, as a nitpick but as something you can improve with-- for the drop shadow on a piece like that with vibrant colours, adjust the blend mode of the drop shadow to be overlay, or to change the colour to an actual hue of what its "dropping" off of, and with the brightness pulled way down, but not to the point of being actual black. I say this because the dullness is the only sore spot for the eyes and other than that it would be perfect. I'm excited to see more stuff.
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