04-30-2014, 11:17 PM
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rain of memories...
Join Date: Oct 2012
Location: Washington (state)
Age: 30
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Re: Rumor of the Gemstones: Exploration Edition
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Originally Posted by MracY
I think the textbook solution is this, although also not particularly elegant.
It is also possible to rewrite the sentence without ambiguity by making it longer, by adding some mannerisms.
At this stage, you can mention her robe by having her do something involving it,
although I think it's usually better to mention the general outline of how something looks when something is either introduced, or by creating a situation in which it is relevant to describe it.
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Thank you very much, I'll try to enrich my sentences and use clearer pronouns in the future.
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Also that triple post is almost as delicious as a hot, fresh, Domino's pizza.
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can y'all take a break and kiss
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(the first section of this chapter)
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5125582...sokyo-no-Jinja
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