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Old 04-30-2014, 11:17 PM   #126
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Default Re: Rumor of the Gemstones: Exploration Edition

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I think the textbook solution is this, although also not particularly elegant.


It is also possible to rewrite the sentence without ambiguity by making it longer, by adding some mannerisms.

At this stage, you can mention her robe by having her do something involving it,
although I think it's usually better to mention the general outline of how something looks when something is either introduced, or by creating a situation in which it is relevant to describe it.
Thank you very much, I'll try to enrich my sentences and use clearer pronouns in the future.

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