[Zaevod]

Originally Posted by StoneMcKnuckle

Lead melody sounds like you just put notes here and there and decided to call it a day.

But that's not what happened. In fact, the rhythm guitar sections and the rest were made after the lead. Just because the melody isn't something you'd expect, doesn't mean it's random or unplanned. This is also extremely vague and subjective.

Not to mention people complain it's "generic" when it's not somewhat unorthodox (though I've actually heard many melodies following this style, so I don't get the problem).

Originally Posted by StoneMcKnuckle

This needs a backing instrument of some sort, it feels a bit empty with just the guitar and lead. The strings that pop in towards the end are not enough, and why are they panned almost entirely to the left?

I guess I panned it too much, but it was not to take the space of the lead. What other instrument would I use?