[baq12]

Originally Posted by Xiz

Song Name: Kirby Smash [Work In Progress]
Style: 4-key
Length: 2:22
Difficulty: Lvl 38-44? Not sure using FFR ranks and whatnot
Artist: Foxsky

Not too bad actually. Nothing felt really awkward and patterns seemed to flow alright, and some decent PR. However I felt that there was major inconsistency in layering throughout, I understand the desire to add variation in some of the more repetitive parts, but there are parts that just seem very empty (the beginning is a prime example). I think adding variations in the patterns while keeping a consistent layering would be fine and make the file a little more enjoyable. You have some interesting ideas on expressing with color notes. Overall just work on consistency in layering (especially in the beginning and some other dense areas that don't have a lot of layering where there should be), and then maybe add some more variation to the patterns in some of the more repetitive parts. Keep on working at it!