11-1-2012, 09:35 AM
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Forum User
Join Date: Nov 2006
Location: Canada
Age: 31
Posts: 2,396
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Re: Show your sketching!
I like the concept of the first one, it looks like a ship approaching a big future-type city or something, however it's very busy. I wish there was something to create a bit more heirarchy in the image. It's kind of all dense with dark lines over where the ship is located.
The second one is cool, i like the little shapes above the head, but i wish there was more attention drawn to that. If the person only had the bottom half of their head (for example) it would be easier to let my eyes follow those weird shapes, instead of being pulled to the dense patch of abnormal hair.
Coolstuff though.
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