[Midnighter]

Originally Posted by lord_carbo

You used "doth" amid your distinctly twenty first century English.

Most of what you say is stupid and uninspired and doesn't invoke any sort of images or emotions in my head.

"Dreaming of my Angel, [...] This radiant Angel of mine," -- Yeah we get it. She's your "angel."

"She's always there for me, / Through the good times and the bad," -- There are some cliche lines in this poem but oh man this takes the cake.


Poetry will not win you any chicks, bro.

How is saying my poem is stupid and uninspired helpful. Yes its cliche. I've heard that for the upteenth time now. I say angel five time. Ok, thanks I actually agree i used angel too much. "If you'd listen to us then maybe you'd be a decent writer. Really, this is a bad poem. It's really really bad." Insulting me isn't helpful either. I'm not the best writer in the world i do it because i enjoy it. If your going to hate or just "give your opinion(bad one)" and not give helpful criticism, then don't I don't care for it.