05-9-2009, 03:49 PM
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FFR Player
Join Date: Dec 2004
Location: fighting villains from afar, NJ
Age: 32
Posts: 6,222
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Re: I Surrender //
Whiny emo poetry. Typical uninspired theme. Like mead said, no flow. Pretty obvious you used a thesaurus (unfurled?). This is not good. Not good at all.
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