01-12-2005, 10:28 PM
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FFR Veteran
Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: Northeasterly
Age: 34
Posts: 397
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Next time, do it outside of class, maybe try some color, and set it up so that it is skinny
to fit on the webpage without scrolling sideways. For a final suggestion: use hair that
sticks up or out more. Then, use more intriguing plot. watermelons can't hold the
attention of most people.
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