10-7-2008, 07:50 PM
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Re: 1555WD
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Originally Posted by FishFishRevolution
Well that's what I was going for sort of. I wanted the reader to sort of feel sorry for / pity the narrator at first, and then feel progressively more creeped out. I was purposely vague as to the narrator's intentions / level of creepjob because it's the nature of stalkers and the reason you don't just talk to strangers. You don't know who they are. I did mention right at the beginning that he had never stalked anyone before so it sort of gives you a frame of reference at least.
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Yea now that you say it the ambiguity makes the reader decide for themselves and it adds another creepy layer to it. Well done.
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