[Starshot]

It is quite, quite hard to tell the bassline away from the bassdrum. Trust me, that's never a good thing. As for the buildup, jesus, I've heard long buildups, but this one truly takes the cake. The fact that it doesn't actually move into something, but merely fades out leaves a hell of a lot to be desired.

The composing isn't bad at all, and the melody sticks in your head, but it would help if we heard more of it.