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**ShastaTwist** · 10-14-2007, 04:42 PM

It kind of seems like you're using big words to make up for your lack of poetic ability.

The first poem sounds like necrophilia to me.

10-14-2007, 04:42 PM	#3
ShastaTwist FFR Veteran Join Date: Sep 2004 Age: 33 Posts: 599	Re: Constructive Criticism Please :D It kind of seems like you're using big words to make up for your lack of poetic ability. The first poem sounds like necrophilia to me.