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I like it Jewpin. You represent the the book well with all of your quotes, and you represent most of the issues at hand.

I like to use more vivid language to get emotions evoked in the reader though. I also would have added a part about the stripping of the language.


And Laharl, although it is about government, I feel it is very well done. It is the extreme of government, but it is done without being exaggerated. It sits on the border of realism and fantasy.