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Forum: Writing and Literature 04-23-2009, 02:19 PM
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Re: I sat by a fire with a notebook tonight.

Pretty awesome poem. Nice, natural rhythm to it, which I think is what you were going for. There are some little nitpicks in the aesthetic department (which Chaz did a good job of pointing out) but...
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