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Forum: Writing and Literature 04-22-2009, 10:50 AM
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Posted By All_That_Chaz
Re: I sat by a fire with a notebook tonight.

Well it certainly sounds nice and the lines read very simply and beautifully. Good job.

1) Try rewriting the first stanza without using two rhymes that use the "u" sound. It sounds very...
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