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Forum: Writing and Literature 03-6-2011, 08:29 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 2,527
Posted By Midnighter
Re: Poem: In the sky

There's no need to waste space on my thread if you've got nothing constructive to say. :) thank you
Forum: Writing and Literature 03-2-2011, 12:06 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,370
Posted By Midnighter
Re: Poetry on College Fears

Nice, mood and tone come through immensely. It free verse with a little rhyming here and ther but correct me if there is suppose to be a concrete rhyme scheme. I like it, but on aside if college is...
Forum: Writing and Literature 02-28-2011, 03:13 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 2,527
Posted By Midnighter
Re: Poem: In the sky

Thank you ^^
Forum: Writing and Literature 02-16-2011, 10:14 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 2,527
Posted By Midnighter
Re: Poem: In the sky

What repetition are you talking about? and the line is definitely not meaningless
Forum: Writing and Literature 02-16-2011, 10:13 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 2,585
Posted By Midnighter
Forum: Writing and Literature 02-6-2011, 02:57 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 2,527
Posted By Midnighter
Re: Poem: In the sky

Oh, there's no need to apologize. Your critiques have actually been the most helpful ^^
Forum: Writing and Literature 02-6-2011, 02:55 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 2,527
Posted By Midnighter
Re: Poem: In the sky

Thanks but, could you elaborate a bit more? If u meant in the final stanza, the last two lines are supose to be the first two refrains repeated. Like I told kitkat9 the form is villanelle, its not a...
Forum: Writing and Literature 02-5-2011, 10:36 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 2,527
Posted By Midnighter
Re: Poem: In the sky

Thanks for the critiques. I actually kind of agree with your comment on the heaviness. This poem was written in the 19th century villianelle format so I was alot more focused on the format than the...
Forum: Writing and Literature 01-31-2011, 06:20 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 2,527
Posted By Midnighter
Red face Poem: In the sky

Originally named "Our souls" I decided to change it cause this sounds better. It was written for black history month. I'm not one to always celebrate it. (I am black just in case you were wondering)...
Forum: Writing and Literature 01-31-2011, 05:54 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,151
Posted By Midnighter
Re: Poem: Rythmic

Some poems just have power behind them that move people...wow this moved me. Its so beautifully written that I just feel light-headed from reading it. Thank you. Poetry is one of the few things that...
Forum: Writing and Literature 01-31-2011, 05:50 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 1,932
Posted By Midnighter
Poem: “All I want for Christmas”

This is a little something i wrote for the holiday lovers (including myself ^^). I was dumb and waited till christmas eve so it was kind of rushed in some places. She liked so I'm good, nothing else...
Forum: Writing and Literature 01-31-2011, 05:44 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 2,585
Posted By Midnighter
Forum: Introductions 12-16-2010, 11:31 PM
Replies: 32
Views: 1,338
Posted By Midnighter
Re: Hi i'm new

i'm a 1.6 years old. Got on just before the site shut down
Forum: Introductions 12-16-2010, 11:22 PM
Replies: 32
Views: 1,338
Posted By Midnighter
Re: Hi i'm new

You are the first Asian I've ever seen with Anime eyes....nice.
Forum: Introductions 12-16-2010, 11:20 PM
Replies: 32
Views: 1,338
Posted By Midnighter
Re: Hi i'm new

Welcome to FFR, a weird cross between Facebook and DDR. I'm Midnighter ^^
Forum: Chit Chat 12-14-2010, 12:40 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 928
Posted By Midnighter
Forum: Chit Chat 12-10-2010, 02:16 PM
Replies: 34
Views: 2,277
Posted By Midnighter
Forum: Chit Chat 12-6-2010, 05:29 PM
Replies: 50
Views: 2,822
Posted By Midnighter
Re: Two Women Arrested For Hiding Stolen Goods In Body Fat

I know its there. At the time double posting was easier :3
Forum: Chit Chat 12-6-2010, 10:05 AM
Replies: 50
Views: 2,822
Posted By Midnighter
Re: Two Women Arrested For Hiding Stolen Goods In Body Fat

On the real though, That is straight NASTY!!!! I laughed soo hard when i read the header. :lol:
Forum: Chit Chat 12-6-2010, 10:04 AM
Replies: 50
Views: 2,822
Posted By Midnighter
Re: Two Women Arrested For Hiding Stolen Goods In Body Fat

Level of stupidity that our world reaches each day never ceases to amaze me.
Forum: Chit Chat 12-3-2010, 11:46 AM
Replies: 8,584
Views: 314,520
Posted By Midnighter
Re: What Are You Listening To?

Collins Hill High School Screamin' Eagle Drumline!!!!!!!
Forum: Chit Chat 11-15-2010, 09:47 AM
Replies: 8,584
Views: 314,520
Posted By Midnighter
Re: What Are You Listening To?

Roscoe Dash- No Hands
Forum: Introductions 10-13-2010, 12:14 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 866
Posted By Midnighter
Re: Midnighter is BACK!!!

I don't mind not being taken seriously. Its not a serious thread. Just hoping my friends see it but more and more of the site is coming back each day so it'll be pretty irrelevant soon. In the...
Forum: Chit Chat 10-13-2010, 09:14 AM
Replies: 116
Views: 3,834
Posted By Midnighter
Re: So how good/bad did you get this past 1.5 year?

I actually have better eye hand cordination than when i started playing 1.75 years ago. I'm not that good as is but I've gotten better.
Forum: Introductions 10-13-2010, 09:05 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 866
Posted By Midnighter
Re: Midnighter is BACK!!!

Let you haters be your motivators
Forum: Introductions 10-12-2010, 07:01 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 866
Posted By Midnighter
Midnighter is BACK!!!

Just like Everybody else I'm looking for my old pals. Anybody here? Its been about a year and a half but it feels like way more. I hope to hear from all of you guys again!
Forum: Chit Chat 10-12-2010, 06:28 AM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,122
Posted By Midnighter
Re: Is it just me..

I know what you mean, the things that aren't working for me are my profile page (not the forum one) and multiplayer on the game. I want to chat with my old friends ><
Forum: Writing and Literature 07-19-2009, 10:45 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,933
Posted By Midnighter
Re: "Orphans" a holocaust poem (slightly graphic)

I was one short of getting to the state competition. :-/ oh, well

I agree with wat u were saying "RB IcePh0enix" i should have put a better word there instead of everywhere. To be honest it was...
Forum: Chit Chat 06-27-2009, 09:49 AM
Replies: 341
Views: 13,623
Posted By Midnighter
Re: Michael Jackson...is dead.

Rest in peace Michael Jackson. Your legacy will live on for generations.
Forum: Writing and Literature 06-23-2009, 10:10 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,734
Posted By Midnighter
Re: All poetry here :)

I'm kind of confused dude. Could you explain it a bit? Thanks.
Forum: Writing and Literature 06-22-2009, 03:06 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,734
Posted By Midnighter
Angry Re: All poetry here :)

The purpose was to write. I try to write daily so i can improve my writing skills. Sometimes i don't feel like writing, but i do anyway so i put something down for the day. It doesn't have to tell me...
Forum: Writing and Literature 06-18-2009, 03:28 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,734
Posted By Midnighter
Re: All poetry here :)

Cool. I guess i'll post second. This is an original poem I wrote while thinking about a bunch of proverbs.

An eye for an eye
and we'd all be blind
to the beauty placed here for us to behold;...
Forum: Writing and Literature 06-15-2009, 12:42 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,933
Posted By Midnighter
Re: "Orphans" a holocaust poem (slightly graphic)

Hitler was... special, to say the least. :lol:
Forum: Writing and Literature 06-14-2009, 08:51 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,933
Posted By Midnighter
Re: "Orphans" a holocaust poem (slightly graphic)

Thats a good point and to be honest i'm not quite sure how it would change. I think even though he didn't cry, he revealed that he still had his humanity by turning away because it's human nature to...
Forum: Writing and Literature 05-29-2009, 07:24 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,933
Posted By Midnighter
Forum: Writing and Literature 05-25-2009, 11:45 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,349
Posted By Midnighter
Re: "Darling" my first love poem

You say "darling" way to much and its kind of creepy. You'd freak the poor chick out. The meter sucks and the poem doesn't flow at all. You're use of words are questionable at the least. It to...
Forum: Writing and Literature 05-25-2009, 11:27 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,933
Posted By Midnighter
Exclamation "Orphans" a holocaust poem (slightly graphic)

The furious night sky hung over like a charred wood.

Black snow fell from everywhere.

Shrieks and screams corroded the air.

The streets were marinated in blood.

They lined us up
Forum: Writing and Literature 05-25-2009, 11:16 PM
Replies: 35
Views: 2,920
Posted By Midnighter
Re: "Angel" My first love poem

thanks for the feedback everyone. I'm gonna be posting some new stuff. they will be poems written before i got feedback on this one so they may be the same, a bit.
Forum: Writing and Literature 05-25-2009, 11:15 PM
Replies: 35
Views: 2,920
Posted By Midnighter
Re: "Angel" My first love poem

This is getting dull
Forum: Writing and Literature 05-19-2009, 11:09 AM
Replies: 35
Views: 2,920
Posted By Midnighter
Re: "Angel" My first love poem

Now you're mocking me. Wow.
Forum: Writing and Literature 05-17-2009, 10:54 PM
Replies: 35
Views: 2,920
Posted By Midnighter
Re: "Angel" My first love poem

I'm glad it was inspiring... if nothing else.
Forum: Writing and Literature 05-16-2009, 10:10 PM
Replies: 35
Views: 2,920
Posted By Midnighter
Re: "Angel" My first love poem

whatever, if you don't like it too bad, it is what it is. For the helpful stuff thanks.
Forum: Writing and Literature 05-15-2009, 03:07 PM
Replies: 35
Views: 2,920
Posted By Midnighter
Thumbs up Re: "Angel" My first love poem

Could you guys check out my other poem. "Today the day" its similar and the same rules apply when critiquing, Thanks :)
Forum: Writing and Literature 05-15-2009, 03:01 PM
Replies: 35
Views: 2,920
Posted By Midnighter
Angry Re: "Angel" My first love poem

How is saying my poem is stupid and uninspired helpful. Yes its cliche. I've heard that for the upteenth time now. I say angel five time. Ok, thanks I actually agree i used angel too much. "If you'd...
Forum: Writing and Literature 05-14-2009, 04:49 PM
Replies: 35
Views: 2,920
Posted By Midnighter
Re: "Angel" My first love poem

For those saying i used to many commas, thanks. I'll fix that i never use to think much about it but i will. For those who just rag on it, no thanks. Your opinion isn't wanted. Helpful none hurtful...
Forum: Writing and Literature 05-12-2009, 04:35 PM
Replies: 35
Views: 2,920
Posted By Midnighter
Re: "Angel" My first love poem

Thanks thats the most helpful critisizm i've gotten since.
Forum: Writing and Literature 05-11-2009, 08:03 PM
Replies: 35
Views: 2,920
Posted By Midnighter
"Angel" My first love poem

This is my first love poem ever written; if your gonna hate don't. Negative critisizm is fine, but don't be rude or mean.

I wander through the day,
My feet walking on air,
Dreaming of my Angel,...
Forum: Writing and Literature 05-11-2009, 07:58 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 928
Posted By Midnighter
Wink Today's the Day

Here's my another love poem by me . Just one of those nice pasttimes, it good for relaxing. ;)

Lingering lightly in the air
Rests the fragrance of what once was there.
Calm and serene in every...
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