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Wintergreen
Forum:
Writing and Literature
09-28-2007, 02:58 AM
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Vaeringard's Poetry Corner.
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1,204
Posted By
Wintergreen
Re: Vaeringard's Poetry Corner.
It had everything to do with a moral sense of responsibility towards minimizing victims of a fraudulent organization.
P.S.
When your father's marching up the stairs towards the computer to take...
Forum:
Writing and Literature
09-28-2007, 12:10 AM
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4
Vaeringard's Poetry Corner.
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1,204
Posted By
Wintergreen
Re: Vaeringard's Poetry Corner.
Poetry.com a.k.a. the International Library of Poetry is a complete and absolute scam that preys on less experienced poets. If you copy the nutrition info from the back of a Campbell's soup can and...
Forum:
Writing and Literature
09-24-2007, 11:26 PM
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Carbo's Poetry Dump 07-08
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1,513
Posted By
Wintergreen
Re: Carbo's Poetry Dump 07-08
I really enjoyed reading these. I mean real enjoyed reading these. I wasn't paying attention them and I couldn't tell you anything about what I just read, but just saying the words was really fun....
Forum:
Writing and Literature
09-17-2007, 08:23 AM
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Robert Jordan 1948-2007
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1,380
Posted By
Wintergreen
Re: Robert Jordan 1948-2007
Well... damn D:
Forum:
Writing and Literature
09-17-2007, 12:30 AM
Replies:
20
My poem
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2,212
Posted By
Wintergreen
Re: My poem
This poem makes sense to no one but the poor bastard who wrote it. This is fine if a poem is written entirely for the self, but if there's any intended audience (and I presume so, as you've posted it...
Forum:
Writing and Literature
09-17-2007, 12:12 AM
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7
Over again [lyrics/poem]
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1,413
Posted By
Wintergreen
Re: Over again [lyrics/poem]
*cough*(acceptable alternative to rhyme)*cough*
*rolls eyes at the ignorant*
Forum:
Writing and Literature
09-16-2007, 12:43 AM
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Over again [lyrics/poem]
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1,413
Posted By
Wintergreen
Re: Over again [lyrics/poem]
1. Blue and blew are homophones, which are an acceptable alternative to rhyme - the same way assonance it.
2. Amok sounds OK to me.
3. I agree.
P.S
I liked it, but I felt it was a...
Forum:
Writing and Literature
09-9-2007, 04:54 PM
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Just sort of threw this together.
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1,221
Posted By
Wintergreen
Re: Just sort of threw this together.
Interesting... You took something extremely cliche (broken hearts) and created something new out of it. Good job. I enjoyed the color association. c:
( P.S. It could use a little clarification....
Forum:
FFR Events
08-29-2007, 05:06 AM
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FFR 3rd Official Tournament! - Signups NOW until Sept 2nd @ 11:59pm EST
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91,429
Posted By
Wintergreen
Re: FFR 3rd Official Tournament! - Signups NOW until Sept 2nd @ 11:59pm EST
in =.=
Forum:
Writing and Literature
08-11-2007, 09:06 PM
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30
Stephen King is sick and twisted.
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5,873
Posted By
Wintergreen
Re: Stephen King is sick and twisted.
I saw the movie with some friends. Their reaction on leaving was, "We're never letting you pick the movie again!" Not that it wasn't good, but the ending was kinda cheesy and lacking in closure. It...
Forum:
FFR General Talk
08-10-2007, 04:13 AM
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Weird Habits While Playing FFR
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11,007
Posted By
Wintergreen
Re: Weird Habits While Playing FFR
Whenever there's a break in a song, I blink rapidly and crack all my finger knuckles with my thumbs, then my thumbs with my fingers. The rest of the song I crack my toes with my other toes.
When...
Forum:
Writing and Literature
08-10-2007, 01:17 AM
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30
Stephen King is sick and twisted.
Views:
5,873
Posted By
Wintergreen
Re: Stephen King is sick and twisted.
Sick and twisted is all a matter of opinion. I myself think gay handjobs are just hawt. :d
Forum:
Writing and Literature
08-7-2007, 10:21 PM
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18
Uhm... Poem
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2,241
Posted By
Wintergreen
Re: Uhm... Poem
Me too. d:P
Forum:
Writing and Literature
08-7-2007, 02:51 AM
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18
Uhm... Poem
Views:
2,241
Posted By
Wintergreen
Re: Uhm... Poem
Hmmm hmmm hmmm... Sorry to inform you, but this is not a poem; it is a short story. Contrary to popular opinion,
irregularly spaced
lines
do not make
a poem.
I do however commend you for...
Forum:
Writing and Literature
07-6-2007, 12:08 AM
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a ~kawaii~ fanficcy i wrote ^.^
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2,431
Posted By
Wintergreen
Re: a ~kawaii~ fanficcy i wrote ^.^
JurseyRider: You fail.
Forum:
Writing and Literature
07-3-2007, 02:50 AM
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52
Favorite Books
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4,258
Posted By
Wintergreen
Re: Favorite Books
Right now there's 8 books in the Ender's Game series.
* Ender's Game
* Speaker for the Dead
* Xenocide
* Children of the Mind
* Ender's Shadow
* Shadow of the Hegemon...
Forum:
Writing and Literature
06-30-2007, 02:02 AM
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52
Favorite Books
Views:
4,258
Posted By
Wintergreen
Re: Favorite Books
I liked Ender's Shadow a lot more. Bean was altogether a more lovable character.
Forum:
Writing and Literature
06-28-2007, 12:53 PM
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52
Favorite Books
Views:
4,258
Posted By
Wintergreen
Re: Favorite Books
Big Brother is watching you. @.@
Forum:
Writing and Literature
06-17-2007, 03:44 AM
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5
An Old Poem by MotF
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1,113
Posted By
Wintergreen
Re: An Old Poem by MotF
This is not a poem. This is a journal entry.
Forum:
Writing and Literature
06-17-2007, 03:42 AM
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3
Heart-Shaped Passion (Love Poem)
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1,657
Posted By
Wintergreen
Re: Heart-Shaped Passion (Love Poem)
Hrm... your punctuation and grammar are off... To prevent run-on sentences, I suggest the use of emdashes. Once you start using 'nor', don't go back to 'no'. The use of the word 'is' in the first...
Forum:
Writing and Literature
06-9-2007, 01:26 AM
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6
Eight Minutes
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1,250
Posted By
Wintergreen
Re: Eight Minutes
*read read read*
I think the first paragraph could benefit from a little more editing, and it was overdramatic to my tastes, but other then that, kewl. The ending was especially neat.
Forum:
Writing and Literature
06-8-2007, 11:54 PM
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50
Literature Collaboration
Views:
3,359
Posted By
Wintergreen
Re: Literature Collaboration
Look what I just pulled out of my butt!
The Word of the Lord
It has been speculated that this universe is all the thoughts/dreams of our creator and that the universe began with a word. But...
Forum:
Writing and Literature
06-8-2007, 12:51 AM
Replies:
50
Literature Collaboration
Views:
3,359
Posted By
Wintergreen
Re: Literature Collaboration
Does that include those who aren't participating in the collab?
Forum:
Writing and Literature
06-6-2007, 12:42 AM
Replies:
10
A poem by me.
Views:
3,246
Posted By
Wintergreen
Re: A poem by me.
*shakes out the last crumbs*
The comicalness wasn't obvious to me. Maybe I'm just thickheaded. n.n' (or too serious :P)
Forum:
Writing and Literature
06-6-2007, 12:36 AM
Replies:
9
The Treachery of Exploration
Views:
2,531
Posted By
Wintergreen
Re: The Treachery of Exploration
One question: What sin is hidden at the center of an onion @.@?
Forum:
Writing and Literature
06-6-2007, 12:24 AM
Replies:
10
A poem by me.
Views:
3,246
Posted By
Wintergreen
Re: A poem by me.
*feeds the poet*
Hmmm... I like the edit better than the original, but both leave me rather unsatisfied as a reader. The first stanza is elegant, beautiful, and complex in it's simplicity. To me,...
Forum:
Writing and Literature
06-5-2007, 06:55 PM
Replies:
2
Make of This What You Will
Views:
924
Posted By
Wintergreen
Re: Make of This What You Will
Why thank you! I'm agonizing over a more serious poem right now, and this was a quick break from that. (I'm at the point where I can see most of my flaws, but not correct them without a great deal...
Forum:
Writing and Literature
06-5-2007, 06:34 PM
Replies:
40
~Spiraling Into Ebony~
Views:
3,889
Posted By
Wintergreen
Re: ~Spiraling Into Ebony~
Nietzsche was a philosopher. A very famous philosopher, as far a philosophers go. He wrote, "when you look into the abyss, the abyss also looks into you". This is one of his most well known quotes....
Forum:
Writing and Literature
06-5-2007, 01:01 PM
Replies:
2
Make of This What You Will
Views:
924
Posted By
Wintergreen
Make of This What You Will
Your eyes aren't the color of clear blue skies,
they're the color of the earth in the garden plot,
but I'd rather have something
I can hold in my hands -
I can smooth and trace
with fingertips...
Forum:
Writing and Literature
06-5-2007, 12:38 PM
Replies:
5
Poetic Evolution
Views:
1,288
Posted By
Wintergreen
Re: Poetic Evolution
Much thanks to everyone who commented. =)
(and extra ♥ to jello n.n)
Forum:
Writing and Literature
06-5-2007, 12:35 PM
Replies:
40
~Spiraling Into Ebony~
Views:
3,889
Posted By
Wintergreen
Re: ~Spiraling Into Ebony~
Some of your turns of phrases had me in stitches. ('the smashing of my face'? heheh n.n) Your writing is riddled with typos (plead=plea, agily=agiley, franticly= frantically, etc, etc), cliches ('I...
Forum:
Writing and Literature
05-16-2007, 03:23 AM
Replies:
5
Poetic Evolution
Views:
1,288
Posted By
Wintergreen
Poetic Evolution
I thought it would be interesting to follow the evolution of my poetry, so I now present to you three poems of my own design, each written a year apart - 8th, 9th, and 10th grade respectively. As...
Forum:
Writing and Literature
05-15-2007, 11:53 AM
Replies:
11
Are you a published poet/author?
Views:
1,416
Posted By
Wintergreen
Re: Are you a published poet/author?
Ahhh... no.
Maybe I'll publish some poetry when I'm older and better... n.n'
Forum:
Writing and Literature
05-4-2007, 12:13 AM
Replies:
2
Oh, for the love of mornings!
Views:
1,013
Posted By
Wintergreen
Re: Oh, for the love of mornings!
It's too cluttered.
I don't think you pulled off the sarcasm.
Forum:
Writing and Literature
05-1-2007, 05:00 PM
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26
"Lessons"
Views:
4,340
Posted By
Wintergreen
Re: "Lessons"
I have brain farts.
Forum:
Writing and Literature
05-1-2007, 04:56 PM
Replies:
26
"Lessons"
Views:
4,340
Posted By
Wintergreen
Re: "Lessons"
No, we're obviously illiterate. Can't you tell? =P
Forum:
Writing and Literature
04-30-2007, 12:33 PM
Replies:
26
"Lessons"
Views:
4,340
Posted By
Wintergreen
Re: "Lessons"
Two females?
...
In FFR?
Fa-wahhh?
(lol)
Forum:
Writing and Literature
04-29-2007, 08:32 PM
Replies:
26
"Lessons"
Views:
4,340
Posted By
Wintergreen
Re: "Lessons"
*shrugs* It's often the littlest changes that make the biggest difference. You don't have to strive for perfection to strive for improvement.
Forum:
Writing and Literature
04-29-2007, 08:04 PM
Replies:
26
"Lessons"
Views:
4,340
Posted By
Wintergreen
Re: "Lessons"
Lol, sorry; I'm a female too.
If you don't care about the quality of your work, then no one else will care enough to give you feedback. I know I at least am not going to waste anymore reviews on...
Forum:
Writing and Literature
04-29-2007, 07:59 PM
Replies:
32
whos you favorite author/poet?
Views:
3,447
Posted By
Wintergreen
Re: whos you favorite author/poet?
The quality of writing is not only in what is told but how it is told.
Forum:
Writing and Literature
04-29-2007, 03:15 PM
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32
whos you favorite author/poet?
Views:
3,447
Posted By
Wintergreen
Re: whos you favorite author/poet?
I spent an interesting series of winter nights reading Edgar Allen Poe's entire collection of short stories and poems out loud with my older brother. *huggles book* He'll always be one of my...
Forum:
Writing and Literature
04-29-2007, 03:07 PM
Replies:
26
"Lessons"
Views:
4,340
Posted By
Wintergreen
Re: "Lessons"
That line is already the longest one in the poem, whereas the last lines of the other stanzas are the shortest ones (other than the first lines). For the sake of parallelism, I sincerely hope he...
Forum:
Writing and Literature
04-29-2007, 03:51 AM
Replies:
26
"Lessons"
Views:
4,340
Posted By
Wintergreen
Re: "Lessons"
I thought the ending was the best part. The rest felt like it was just working it's way there.
I suggest using a rhyming dictionary if you have trouble. Just type in rhyming dictionary on Google...
Forum:
Writing and Literature
04-28-2007, 03:40 AM
Replies:
26
"Lessons"
Views:
4,340
Posted By
Wintergreen
Re: "Lessons"
Because poetry is the most concentrated form of writing, every single word, every syllable is important. This poem has a very strong voice, and I think this quality is greatly lowered by your use of...
Forum:
Writing and Literature
04-28-2007, 03:35 AM
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32
whos you favorite author/poet?
Views:
3,447
Posted By
Wintergreen
Re: whos you favorite author/poet?
I so agree, though I don't think Dostoevsky is so far behind.
Charles Dickens is way too dry in my opinion.
Forum:
Writing and Literature
04-28-2007, 03:32 AM
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11
erm, poem.
Views:
1,740
Posted By
Wintergreen
Re: erm, poem.
You wrote if you were to let it free, implying that it isn't. It's in the closet.
Forum:
Writing and Literature
04-26-2007, 09:06 PM
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11
erm, poem.
Views:
1,740
Posted By
Wintergreen
Re: erm, poem.
Well what do you expect me to think when your poem says your soul is 'shut in a closet'?
Forum:
Writing and Literature
04-26-2007, 07:49 AM
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11
erm, poem.
Views:
1,740
Posted By
Wintergreen
Re: erm, poem.
I read this as being about homosexuality.
Forum:
Writing and Literature
04-25-2007, 10:08 PM
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10
My poem
Views:
1,985
Posted By
Wintergreen
Re: My poem
I didn't mean that ambiguity is a bad thing, just that too much ambiguity is. What I was trying to get across with the questions is that if one didn't know anything about Cowboy Bebop, they would...
Forum:
Writing and Literature
04-25-2007, 07:39 PM
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10
My poem
Views:
1,985
Posted By
Wintergreen
Re: My poem
Right from the start, your meter is off. You have three stressed syllables smack dab in the middle of the first line (set free, But), which make it very awkward to say. Try reading your poem out...
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