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Ohaider 11-25-2012 09:35 PM

Dohraymefahsolateedoh
 
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/512922

StoneMcKnuckle 11-25-2012 09:41 PM

Re: Dohraymefahsolateedoh
 
sounds great so far, unexpectedly.

what's this genre called?

Ohaider 11-25-2012 09:45 PM

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Man i have no idea, subgenre of hip hop i suppose
Inspiration came from Vanilla



Oh and XXYYXX


Ohaider 11-26-2012 02:41 PM

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Updated, probably won't do much more with it haha

StoneMcKnuckle 11-27-2012 12:43 AM

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"file has never existed or has been deleted"

it's a conspiracy

Ohaider 11-27-2012 02:16 AM

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Quote:

Originally Posted by StoneMcKnuckle (Post 3809008)
"file has never existed or has been deleted"

it's a conspiracy

fixedd

anwar-inc 11-27-2012 04:29 PM

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Quote:

The file you're looking for either never existed or has been deleted.
It still seems to be an issue with me.

Ohaider 11-27-2012 05:34 PM

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Quote:

Originally Posted by anwar-inc (Post 3809218)
It still seems to be an issue with me.

arghhh yeah **** tindeck

anwar-inc 11-27-2012 06:30 PM

Re: Dohraymefahsolateedoh
 
It seems to work now.

I like this. I don't know if you used a sample for the melodic section, but it seems to work very well and it was a very nice groove you have in there. The drum/percussive section seemed a little weak for me but that's probably because I've been hooked on artists such as Flying Lotus and TOKiMONSTA who in their style tend to use harder drums.

Did you use sidechain in your work? I don't know if I can hear it or not. A little bit of a sidechain added would give the tune some more rhythmic value if you're interested in that, though it really isn't needed.

Nice work. I enjoyed.

A little example of what I listen to and where I'm coming from.

Ohaider 11-27-2012 06:36 PM

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Quote:

Originally Posted by anwar-inc (Post 3809297)
A little example of what I listen to and where I'm coming from.

Yeah that was unbelievably cool, wasn't going for drums as hard as that though heh just basic commodities

And yes i do side chain, not too much though in this song :-)

thanks for the feedback and showing me that sick ass song

Edit: Oh yeah and the melody at the end wasn't sampled

Wayward Vagabond 11-27-2012 09:40 PM

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this is so sick ~_~

Ohaider 11-28-2012 03:36 PM

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Quote:

Originally Posted by KgZ (Post 3809424)
It's a pretty neat beat, I miss this style of music.

Everything sounds pretty mono at the moment. I would definitely try widening your mix a couple of ways. You could add an extra instrument that spreads on both sides left and right on the pan pot. Or you could sample delay your original jazz sample clip so that you create the illusion of stereo imaging.

Also, I think the vinyl effect is cool, but I think it's a bit overbearing in the mix as well.

Keep it up guy! Love this sound you got going on.

Ahhh very useful feedback ty:)
Vinyl effect is pretty loud white noise layered with scratches which explains why it's prolly overbearing, as well as the fact i raised the db a tiny bit above 15 khz hahah, fixed that up though. Thank you!

Kept it mono to give the hip hop feel, no vocalists though :[ might see what i can do unless someone wants to rap about downs syndrome or something for the track

Glad you enjoyed


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