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Everyone I have showed this to has loved it so I'd thought to share this on my favorite site.
Would love the feed back on this collab.

http://soundcloud.com/narshlaw/diversky-narshlaw-revelations

~Narshlaw

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Not going to get into arrangement I don't think you care about that. Bass that comes in at like 1:10 becomes too loud at 1:20 you can have a good sub bass going on without drowning the mix out. on the other side of the spectrum around 2:10 there's a really high bell sound and the highs of it are actually hurting my ears.

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Thank you, this will honestly help towards future projects. Also, we were going to go more into it, but I lost two hard drives in the process of everything. Long story short we just had to accept what we had. What do you mean about me not caring for arrangement?

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np. When I say arrangement I mean the actual chord progression. the transitions are fine besides the static chord progression (vi IV I V) which is so overdone it's almost not pleasurable for me to listen to. Of course that's my opinion and really has nothing to do with the mix of your song.

Keep it up. :)

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Ahhh, I know what you mean there. It really is over used in most cases, I just wanted to be able to use this because of the amount of time I waited just to find out it's basic sample slicing. Thanks for the constructive criticism. Hope you enjoyed the song though