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CheifLightning 05-15-2012 10:37 AM

Poems
 
I know there is most likely a poem page out there, But i couldn't find it.

So, i made this post for people to post poems and comment on poems people made,

Please only post original Made by You Poems. I'll start off with a few before i head to work.



( I thought freedom was free,
Then why is freedom Barking at me,
Howling,
Growling,
Not letting me see,
Not letting me be me,
I see freedom is not free,
Freedom is not for me )

( Here i sit in this darkness,
Searching for the key to set me free,
Looking for the light of purity,
Hoping to be set free by the grace of love,
Wishing from down to above,
I look around to see a light,
Could it be here to set me free,
I finally reliazed your the key,
Your the one to set me free )

( Love is of the world,
The world is of the darkness,
So where is the world of the light?,
I shall only know when i meet thee. )

Cyr 05-15-2012 01:48 PM

Re: Poems
 
I am the cat,
the cat of many hats, the cat of many naps,
a purr here and a furball wherever I've sat
no matter what you wear you'll be covered in my hair
meowing at your door at midnight for no reason
I full-well know you'll be a sleep but don't care
payback for buying the cheap litter which I feel is treason
scratch scratch scratch your back as a post
yarn strands around your house from season to season
still you love your kitty kat the most
I am the cat

comments and criticisms pls

Frans813 05-15-2012 05:34 PM

Re: Poems
 
I'm a write of Emo Poetry might aswell support this page ^.^

THERE GOES THE SUN! Darker then before,
There I saw you lieying dead on the floor.
Those dreams keep haunting me,
Everyone here is dying, can't you see?
I wanna rip my heart out of my chest to stop the ache,
But the pain became a part of me for god sake!
We all know that you're gone,
It is finished, all said and done.
You don't have to say a word,
But know I'm in a world full of hurt.
We never had the chance to say goodbye.
I just want to ask you why.
Once again we all know that you're gone.
Hope you find the place were you belong.
When the time comes for me to see,
I hope that you will wait for me.

~Save a spot for me in heaven


direct copy paste from my facebook

Choofers 05-15-2012 06:07 PM

Re: Poems
 
roses are red
violets are purple
I suck at rhyming
you look like shit

Hateandhatred 05-15-2012 06:08 PM

Re: Poems
 


Couldnt resist.

On a serious note, I do have a large amount of poetry, but not in English...

Frans813 05-15-2012 09:02 PM

Re: Poems
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Hateandhatred (Post 3693698)


Couldnt resist.

On a serious note, I do have a large amount of poetry, but not in English...

Oooooookaaaaaaay...
Was that made becus I said I'm a writer of emo poetry or is just smtn random you came up with :confused:

CheifLightning 05-16-2012 01:49 AM

Re: Poems
 
great poems everyone,

Nicely made, ^.^

DustyFart 05-16-2012 04:14 AM

Re: Poems
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Choofers (Post 3693697)
roses are red
violets are purple
I suck at rhyming
you look like shit

That was so touching and heart warming. It was well written and I could tell that you put a lot of time and effort into that poem. 10/10. BRAVO!

Hateandhatred 05-16-2012 05:08 AM

Re: Poems
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Frans813 (Post 3693826)
Oooooookaaaaaaay...
Was that made becus I said I'm a writer of emo poetry or is just smtn random you came up with :confused:

Rofl!

It is something I had to record for a contest on FFR! I found it relevant to put it here.

Hateandhatred 05-16-2012 05:12 AM

Re: Poems
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Choofers (Post 3693697)
roses are red
violets are purple
I suck at rhyming
you look like shit

"Poem of the day" at my college was as follow once:

Roses are red
Violets are blue
I suck at poetry
Show me your tits.

Very similar to yours, meaning you have a genius poetry mind.

Frans813 05-16-2012 09:21 AM

Re: Poems
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Hateandhatred (Post 3694002)
Rofl!

It is something I had to record for a contest on FFR! I found it relevant to put it here.

Okay I was just thinkin :P

Sky Kitten 05-16-2012 12:11 PM

Re: Poems
 
Moved to Literature. :)

Really nice poems, guys. (lmao at Choofers' poem xD)

CheifLightning 05-17-2012 11:18 PM

Re: Poems
 
Gather we will. Each in search of a thrill. A reason for feeling the needing to kill. To stop whats happening. To silence the screams. To not be afraid. To sleep and dream. To feel in control and to take it all back. To fall into peace as the sky turns to black. Hope you got what you wanted. This wonderful wish. To kill everyday until nothing exist in the world but you. Your the last one alive. But with no conflict to confront. Will there be a reason to survive. Will the anger just die. Or will you kill that aswell. As you sit all alone in your personal hell

who_cares973 05-17-2012 11:45 PM

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ring around the roses
ash tray full of dreams
trapped in my own fortress
the pain agony and screams
posies are my last defense
in my pocket they are found
vision blurry it makes no sense
my end is here beneath the ground

Evascythe 05-24-2012 04:02 AM

Re: Poems
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Hateandhatred (Post 3693698)


Couldnt resist.

On a serious note, I do have a large amount of poetry, but not in English...

Is that a Couche-Tard name tag I see? :3

Frans813 05-24-2012 06:02 AM

Re: Poems
 
Soon Iīll be losing what is left of my dignity,
But things will get better from here.
It will all be just a simple possibility,
But I can hold on as long you are near.

People lie it is their nature,
I love you with all my heart.
They say that to sound mature,
But in the end they will leave, itīs simple as that.

People will hurt so people can die,
Love is the cause of the biggest wars.
People may smile so that others can cry,
Life might seem easier behind bars.

What said is done,
Theres no turning back.
I wonder what you have become,
Did you stay on the right track?

My dignity will soon be gone,
It is a lesson from my life.
When I’m ready and done,
I will answer with… will you be my wife?


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