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Xiz	05-11-2012 05:27 PM

My first real song?

So I mean... I made this two months ago but I need some critique on it for when I make my next song. This is really my second attempt at making music. So yeah, one question:

If you could change / improve / takeaway one thing - what would it be. Thanks <3

http://soundcloud.com/vincent-de-la-torre/outofcereal

Mau5	05-11-2012 05:38 PM

Re: My first real song?

1:37 FOK YA

Extremely nice job for your first song! You've got potential haha

The only thing i'm not a huge fan of is that WUBWUB scratches of a sorts at like 2:15 and 2:17, but you did pretty well with balance throughout the whole song haha. You're a natural!

Xiz	05-12-2012 12:56 AM

Re: My first real song?

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mau5 (Post 3690900)

Thanks :)

And yeah, I struggle with matching dubstep related material into what im doing. Thanks for your feedback!

DjMeas

05-12-2012 03:28 AM

Re: My first real song?

Posted my thoughts on your SC Waveform :) Great to hear new musicians, keep it up!

Xiz	05-13-2012 03:05 PM

Re: My first real song?

Quote:

Originally Posted by DjMeas (Post 3691263)

Posted my thoughts on your SC Waveform :) Great to hear new musicians, keep it up!

I love your input!! Thanks man that really helps :)

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