Got bored last night. Want opinions on this.

[DJ Mamu]

I made this last night in like.. An hour. It's (obviously, lol) done in FL Studio. I know the synth comes in abruptly. I liked it when I exported it but I don't like it anymore and I only have the demo. lol. So oh well.

It's only 30 seconds long. I could've extended it, but something compelled me to make a short 30 second loopable little thing. That's why it just kinda ends weird.

What do people think?

http://boxstr.com/files/3169719_ohuig/Silverline.mp3

[fo3h4mm3r]

I like it quite a bit =]

[EAGAMES]

It'd be great if you increased the length of the song. I like it so far.

[DJ Mamu]

Didn't you have a different username before DJ Mamu?

It feels a bit clucky at the moment. Most of the song feels random, and there isn't any sort of structure I can follow at the moment. It sounds alright so far.

I used to be Ninja_Monkey but FFR won't ever let me log in to it, even though I'm using the correct pw? Whatevs.

This is how most of my songs come out now lol I try and fit every idea that comes into my head into a single song and it never works. >_>

[Verruckter]

Meh

it was ok